This Poem was Submitted By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2012-03-04 20:05:33 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!To Listen to Music While Reading this Poem, just Click Here!
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My Feb 2012 vote Following MSS's lead, here's my vote. The main reason I'm posting this is because I've got so much voting weight this month...it can't be a bad thing for people to know how I'm using it.
"Parking Ticket" submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer
"An Analysis of Relativity Relative to Relevance" submitted by Tony P Spicuglia
"Undiscovered" submitted by cheyenne smyth
"Painter’s Society" submitted by Lora Silvey
"Wondering" submitted by Dellena Rovito
"i woke up and read keats" submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer
"Carnival Glass" submitted by Dellena Rovito
"Cedar Swing" submitted by cheyenne smyth
"The Sting is Inconsequential (la miel motiva todo)" submitted by Tony P Spicuglia
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Copyright © March 2012 Mark Andrew Hislop
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2012-03-15 15:34:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
February 2012 was a great month here so much so I wasn't able to read and critique all posts accordingly.
It takes time and thought to read through them all and give them the best critique as perceived by each reader.
MSS, Lora, Dellena, Cheyenne, JC, Tony, Ellen, others along with yourself made it very good month here.
Very happy to see Rachael post for March - it's almost like a reunion and a good one at that.
blessings,
Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2012-03-10 06:46:55
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
MAH,
I'll trespass where I have every right to: your rankings of my poems. Vortex? Watch it I don't stir one up and send it your way. :)
I understand you had very good company: JCH. But I'm disappointed, or rather oddly bemused. Perhaps I know nothing, but if getting the sound in one's head and the pulse in one's veins down in the best possible form, and having something of universal meaning to say to boot, is the definition of successful poetry (and I think it is), then I'll be damned if i could have done much better than "i woke up and read keats" or "Time Travel."
In the future I'll just get drunk, stand on my hand, and spit out "Parking Tickets."
On the other hand (smile) . . .
This place is a ton of fun when we take it seriously; lay it all out on the table (publish our selections); vote like it matters eternally (though of course it doesn't); and stand tall. Thou are my brother in that, and it's wonderful to be back to back with thee.
MSS
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2012-03-08 22:28:41
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Very nice- worth the read.
This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-03-07 23:32:39
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 3.00000
Noble practice, this disclosure. That is,presuming the favor is returned. However, some people cannot be
shamed into being fair and just. So I am not going to be hidebound to it. But I respect the idea. JCH
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