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The trouble of love
Not so long ago I was lost and lonely Then I met you And I want you to know I think I`m in trouble Maybe I should run On the double Straightaway into your arms Let my heart keep you warm My love will keep you calm In my arms you will be safe I never felt this way before Like the calm before the storm Its been so long I`d forgotten what love was for I`m in trouble Oh,yeah,trouble Maybe I should run away On the double And Find a way to say Show you what I feel Its trouble I was lost and lonely Then I met you Now see what love can do Its trouble Yes,I`m in trouble And I`m a running On the double Straight into your arms Ah,ah ah Trouble
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2012-05-08 19:29:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Michael this is cute- love = trouble - and it seems to me that someone has your heart and may have it for a very long time. Love is a wonderful feeling - the newness and the time in getting to know someone else - It's clear, concise and gets the message across easily without embellishing it with a lot of imagery. Nice - I like it, blessings, Deni
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