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Cheryl Said This was ok
When the winds tell me To turn around Take notice now To the smoke signals that still seek you To the rainbows that still hold such promise To the bird speak that you seem to underestand To the perfect mistakes To the impossible faith Daring the dreams that only you can dream
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-01-24 11:26:49
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, don't know about Cheryl; I do know the simple poem is cogent- and look at what has been lost, regardless, or what one has- in perpetuity. This is the sort of poem that makes its way into compilations, and is read a thousand times over for those in love or the heartbroken. It is a rare poem that speaks succinctly to both subsets of love. I enjoyed the piece, read it several times, and will read it again. It made me feel good. The only earthshattering images are of the heart and soul. That suites me fine. I wouldn’t change a word.
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