This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2014-01-08 07:16:48 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Into It

Emboldening momentary look               (not glance) Lingering touch almost caress               (not chance) Signifying more I want given               (not needing) In the instant to know steady               (not passing) Is it that those that cannot possess   decide for the rest as if in regress              Of the wonder to hope

Copyright © January 2014 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-01-16 14:33:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hello JC - Your chosen words of adj's empower this poem making more of an impact on the entire poem. So many good things in this piece - The emotions are very deep - and you've carefully suggested that the giver is just what they are - they give of themselves - with passion without ulterior motives - just pleased to make a difference if only for a moment. I enjoyed this write, Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2014-01-08 23:19:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Yeah. Finally an attuned poet to lead us. Great poem but the last line says it all
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