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If Ever If ever there was a poem I would swear it was from you that cosmos thing that you do so well it is from here and ever onward that we believe our oneness a collision of two |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2014-06-01 17:55:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joe,
Very tender rendition of a love poem - a connection made like no other - The poem is short but no expansion would be needed - structure, rhyme and imagery are wonderful - and I love the title as well -
blessings,
Deni