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I So Want To I so want to discover you again To be that astounded again To be in that space where unicorns have a place Where dragonflies and leprechauns play And dandelions and roses proclaim, a single and ultimate love To be where I have never been before That place of whimsy That place of yore |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2014-07-05 10:53:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
First off the use of “yore” and the homophone “your”. Wonderful!
And the meaning, the being, the neediness in retrospect moves me as I read it. I know the feeling well, on many levels to revisit- magic.
Love, and beauty- are so integral and the emotions stirred by that moment of knowledge, is incredibly potent.
A beautiful piece, thank you for sharing that time with us.