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Please take your dress off and lie in my bed Let me talk to you about rainbows and kiss flowers into your head Let the silence of our moment be the mentor of this second Let the hours pass by like the clouds in the sky It is for us that we surrender smoothing the gagged rocks with our tender as we remember what brought us together In the first place
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2016-03-30 15:34:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, Your lyricism took a smoke break and . . . not a favorite of yours for me. Mark
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