This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-03-19 23:34:30 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Please take your dress off and lie in my bed Let me talk to you about rainbows and kiss flowers into your head Let the silence of our moment  be the mentor of this second Let the hours pass by like the clouds in the sky It is for us that we surrender smoothing the gagged rocks with our tender  as we remember what  brought us together In the first place

Copyright © March 2016 Joe Gustin

This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2016-03-30 15:34:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Joe, Your lyricism took a smoke break and . . . not a favorite of yours for me. Mark

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2016-03-28 22:09:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Your love poems are so softly written with a very nice rhyme scheme; I so appreciate your imagery as well - it's a honed talent only men with beautiful spirits can achieve - Any woman would love this piece - Very nicely written Joe, blessings Deni
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