This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-11-11 14:44:30 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Come Back.

If I sent you enough poems to created a path, a way for you to sway your yourself  gently my way again Each poem would be a stepping stone a worded map to guide to bring you home After all, each poem  is born of you your smile your kiss your touch in your heated rush to my soul

Copyright © November 2016 Joe Gustin

This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-11-23 09:27:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I think you have written enough poems about this woman to have us all go looking for her. The poems like stones/guides to bring her back "home" reminded me of Hansel and Gretel in the woods. Makes me wonder if she on her way to the witch's candy house? What I like most about your poems is that they are so simply worded.. so easy to read that one cannot resist being drifted into a dream.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-11-11 21:48:08
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joe, There is a poem I recognize. Just tonight I was playing my guitar and singing love songs written for loves- who may never hear them- of this, you had me, “smile”, “kiss”, “touch”, “heated rush to my soul”, how poignant that all of it is summed in such descriptors. S1L2 – create not created Splendid poem to go with my night of love and lost love, sung to only me.
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