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If I sent you enough poems to created a path, a way for you to sway your yourself gently my way again Each poem would be a stepping stone a worded map to guide to bring you home After all, each poem is born of you your smile your kiss your touch in your heated rush to my soul
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2016-11-23 09:27:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
I think you have written enough poems about this woman to have us all go looking for her. The poems like stones/guides to bring her back "home" reminded me of Hansel and Gretel in the woods. Makes me wonder if she on her way to the witch's candy house? What I like most about your poems is that they are so simply worded.. so easy to read that one cannot resist being drifted into a dream.
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