This Poem was Submitted By: Joe Gustin On Date: 2016-11-11 14:45:48 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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If Ever There

If ever there was a time  to take pause it is now Yes to remember the war dead that lie on both sides of the equation It is what took them there we must rebel about we all must take a stand  and for their sake that we  raise up all in one might roar  with united voice to say NO MORE WAR!!!!!

Copyright © November 2016 Joe Gustin

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2016-11-21 20:34:36
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
What an ideal world we would live in with no more wars; no more senseless killing, no more violence put on media to watch, cringe and forget about because we're not there - in the midst of it - we hear and see all of the horrible details from afar - unless - we are apart of the military and their pledges to "fight" for what's right" - The are drilled over and over to become almost mechanical to win and claim victory - for what? There's enough time in life to find death in other ways and we unfortunately have been "at War" far too many times, beautiful poem, Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2016-11-11 21:57:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joe- so goes paradise I guess. I understand. I also know two hundred Christians were beheaded by the filth of the earth, because of no war. I wish, I wish, I wish, but wishes... Well, sir, I understand. All sides, however; must embrace the call, or one side must defend the innocent. I understand your sentiment, and I applaud.
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