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Part Two: The Spiral Floating, swimming through seas of black. Laced with acid and shiny fragments of love. Overwhelming feelings of emptiness lift me, becoming one with the stars around me. I cry alone because of you. Swimming in an ocean I created. I can feel the pressure in my ears, feels like if I just let go. I could maybe leave this place. In a world of mechanical beings avast, I know I dont belong. Through the eyes of someone long gone, I drown phanthoms below the surface. Yet I feel a peace within me. Different than anything I've ever felt. Could this be the "otherside"? Or an illusion my mind has created? Waiting for a light to pull me through, all I see are tiny little stars. So distant in the vast depths. I can see my own reflection. Who is this I look at? So familar and unfamilar adjust. Turn the mirror around, and see the one who has forsaken you. Floating,swimming through seas of black. Laced with acid and broken memories. Overwhelming feelings of nothing release me. I HAVE BEEN BLENDED. |
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