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Displaying Critiques 71 to 71 out of 71 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Ashni Irey | Critique Date |
| My Father's Funeral | Nancy Ann Hemsworth | I find this poem very invoking of emotions in theme. However, I feel like much can be done to improve the flow of poetry ... a starting suggestion would be punctuation and better alignment for ease of reading. I liked the intervening blocks of phrases such as 'So Sorry' and the last two as well. I remember watch him "write it writing it as" ... needs to be revised to just "write it". As I said earlier, the theme is very moving and has potential for invoking a lot more emotion in people if written the right way. | 2007-02-07 21:53:29 |
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