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Day Time Time tilts toward the centre Moves in sync, as if in play, Time tickles like a feather Spinning in your arms, today. Time tousles fiery tresses Watch Janie spin and soar Time tosses off guesses Who loves living more? Time reckons like Janie, Snatches and holds fast, Heals sorrow with glances, Seals moments in glass. Time gathers to laud you Moves in circles today Skates up to applaud you Day-blooming Jane Day |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Brandon Gene Petit On Date: 2003-09-04 13:43:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.28205
Another good example of a witty, free-flowing poem. It sparrks intellectual insight,
thanks to the careful wording and effective meter. Creative and inspiring!
- Brandon