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In This Light I Am Blue If only you'd known I was a - felt this unbelievably blue, You would never have taken from me your caring eye Lest one day I swallow the pink pills (see them there) Or wear a vest of plastics and walk into Jupiter and Detonate the both of us into solar system-ic dust You should never let a blue-girl walk the streets at night You could hire a guardian – see, I've got more than moons! – Or would you call a shrink, a mediator, perhaps buy a chain? Would you lock me up inside your rings with strings, Like - OK, like I’ve - done here? No, you wouldn’t. At least – Well, if you’d known I was this beautiful – Would you have bought – borrowed, more likely – flowers? Well, you tell me. How would you paint this, this - ? Would there be any color - O pain! - at all? Circling your sun, with the top down – Waiting. Me and my moons, in the Camaro Haloed for eternity, waiting for you. |
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This Poem was Critiqued By: Jordan Brendez Bandojo On Date: 2004-04-22 19:27:17
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.54545
Hi T (as in Tom),
I got the picture, thanks for the site. It is Uranus!
Lest one day you walk into Jupiter! How about the picture of it? Hehe!
"Detonate the both of us into solar system-ic dust"
Oh, you will be drifted into Black Hole and never come back again!
But that is ok because it is both of you. How dangerously sweet!
I just love your Physics and Astronomy here!
Jordan