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GrandMemeres Love (First poem) Innocent warm arms reach out for you eyes so radiant and blue Trusting the mirror of your soul Loving all that's good in you The warm young body presses against you You pray Dear Lord embrace this youth guide her-love her-protect her When I am gone no longer will this earthly body give her comfort May the spirit of all eternity of a Grandmothers love remain in her heart May the presence and all that is good Create in her what God willed A life radiating the spirit of being a beatiful loving-caring-enduring woman who completes the circle |
Additional Notes:
To My beautiful blue eyed Granddaughters, this is my first poem ever.
This Poem was Critiqued By: James Edward Schanne On Date: 2004-11-29 13:57:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.50000
Sounds like a good first poem and children and grandchildren are always an inspiration.thanks for letting me read and comment.