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Prelude To A Kiss Through the mists of time, we are parting the veils of mystery, as we now meet again. Don't waste your life, on a single wish, for that longing kiss. Bring me a boat with sides of silver blue, lets sail away, to the new dawn, glorious in all its majesty. I'm caught up in the thrill of the chase, tingles down my spine and my skin on fire, lips slightly open and moist. Air filled with the heady scent of lust! A kiss so hot yet tender, so passionate yet chaste, rare is real love. Let's just enjoy the taste. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Patricia Gibson-Williams On Date: 2005-03-05 17:58:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.00000
I seem to be having a lot of trouble concentrating today, but I wanted to comment on your poem because I thought it was beautiful. So very sensual and rythmic. I wish I could tell you line by line how it affected me and what I got out of it, but I just can't seem to figure out why I liked and what to say. Maybe in a few days I'll think of something other then I liked it and I'll send you a message, but for now that will have to be enough. If this doesn't make sense blame it on my killer headache... but your poem has helped soothe it just a bit. Patti