This Poem was Submitted By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2006-08-20 00:41:52 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Five Words and Five Lines

For the first is first and the last is last. Our future depends but upon our past. History repeats.

Copyright © August 2006 Ellen K Lewis

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just a fun little ditty....if ya' want ta' get nitty.....SMILE and just enjoy it!

This Poem was Critiqued By: Turner Lee Williams On Date: 2006-08-21 09:45:59
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Ellen--An almost limerick, this brevity of verbiage is both a puzzle and a sad commentary of humanity's fate. In my opinion, this inference of an unending cyclic misstep is melancholic. I personally didn't think the work was fun, but found it poetically and prophetically written. Sorry for my somber discernment. TLW

This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2006-08-20 14:28:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Oh yah! But it's a circle...don't get purple! Cute...I think all poets need to get off the circle once in awhile!
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