This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2012-04-13 05:56:40 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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The Unregarding

You do not pay attention but dribble thought                          down on paper As if you've caught splendor in a moment                   like an accident                         that didn't hurt

Copyright © April 2012 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2012-04-29 14:35:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
JCH, Could the geist of their poem mean exactly their intent? Or could their eye opener be as a child? I've written lots of drivel dibble one day and thought it wonderful and the next day realized it's crap. It ain't easy to be brilliant all the time or even some of the time. We each have our pace. It can be tough to read at times. I'm saying it as I see it. You keep us all humping here....... Thanks for that! Dellena .

This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark D. Kilburn On Date: 2012-04-18 17:58:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi James, Appreciate your many comments and thought I'd read a couple of yours. Long poems can make for a grueling read but not so here, still-My critique would be this, keep going with this poem and don't stop where you did- Is it excellent the way it is now? Yes very much so and I can't offer any sug. at all. Why do I say keep going? Not every poem on the link are all that fun to read, this was so just out of pure selfishness from my P.O.V. i would like to keep reading and reading, dam nice stuff and my hope is that you are not punished point wise for such brevity. mk Serendipity might also fit title wise?
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2012-04-17 16:08:42
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Wow, James--one can take this in sooooooo many directions. Yes sometimes we do get so caught up within ourselves that we just don't see the forest for the trees and in our own little diluded egomaniacal worlds (mine being of altered states naturally)we percieve our works as something qutie a bit more than what it is. Then again, perhaps you remind us that all is within the perception of the author or reader subjectively... and possibly this would serve as notice not to take ourselves quite so seriously. First rate poem, causes one to engage brain even if the cogs groan--most enjoyable and a delight to ponder. Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ellen K Lewis On Date: 2012-04-13 23:55:19
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
LOL James! Thank you for that imagery. I suppose it has a deeper meaning to someone, but for me it is sufficient for the whole of us. It includes me for sure, and many others. What can I say? "splender in a moment" ? ~smiles~ Ellen
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