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Insects and Other Tiny Nations Once when the light of day melted from blue to silver, a little girl floated away from Earth. She observed tiny beings busy with work, playing in the wind, caring for relations. Earthworms wiggled, black crickets chirped, orange caterpillars crawled, green beetles ticked on dancing leaves, while yellow Monarchs and red dragonflies flew in dazzling displays. And when they all arose to where she waited, they told her tales of all that lived in air, in dirt, in hives - of hopes and tiny homes sometimes poisoned - of bodies pulled apart. Though they understood that they were often food for frogs, birds and other tiny nations, they didn’t know why they were being stomped, swatted and pulled apart. As the child watched, a globe appeared; like a magnet it drew them into a living sphere of insect races. Then Grandmother Moon molded them into a glittering star, a gleaming phosphorous light. Now moths and bees and crickets lit the night and gleamed the sky with prayers and graces. |
Additional Notes:
Inspired by "Peace to All Beings" by judy Carman; dedicated to my granddaughter Beatrice.
This is a 'working version' and all suggestions are welcome.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Elaine Marie Phalen On Date: 2004-03-07 22:30:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Joanne, I'm out of time, mad at the "system" for robbing me of my weekend's critiquing, and on my way to get some sleep .... but I have to tell you what a delight this is! The visual detail is just so engaging. S2 is like an animated painting of the insect kingdom! S3, the pivotal strophe, introduces an element of horror into this happy busyness. The insects then assume metaphorical proportions and become, well, us. Perhaps a child might not quite grasp the parallel, but we do. The globe that draws in its admirers then offers a hope of redemption, which the closing lines affirm.
Harmony is possible, although not always conceivable unless we dream with passion and expectation. I love this poem. It speaks to me, and to all who long for something better than what we've made of our own world. The "living sphere of insect races" seems Utopian and lovely.
I've read that insects will survive mammals and eventually inherit the earth. If so, I pray that they will use her well.
Gotta go ... good luck with this one tonight!
Brenda