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At The Real Life’s Return Great Care’s gift to hearts in lack finds no delight in bolted ears, obstructed in themselves it seems. Somewhat like Death, as it fails to effect his own removal and restore eternal life. Ought not perturbing thoughts on such a noble level impart flesh to walk the Way? Though, any hope to balance scales rests far beyond and outside man. It’s solely that unwarranted love is born of such a renown that moves gratefulness to tears. Yet, while death veils the souls - those souls past existence, deep in pits of yawning refuse, the angel choirs still are left to echo restoration’s hope to stand along His promise. Or, if one slumbers centuries embalmed in death’s dour rest, his word is certain to fulfill the return of paradise. When every eye is bound to see his power restore the real life, the life exuding gladness, the life to last all time, the life bathed in perfection that life that He first purposed back there “in the beginning.” |
Additional Notes:
NB: Written in the esteem of
John Milton’s Paradise Regained.
(Published 1671)
This Poem was Critiqued By: Turner Lee Williams On Date: 2005-04-05 21:48:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.70588
Lennard--Although I'm not familar with Milton's "Paradise Regained," this appears
to be a pretty ambitious undertaking: attempting a post to parallel the sentiments
of such a noted scribe. Your piece depict the frailities/shortcomings/sins of man,
including his free will to know and chose the wisdom/salvation/redemption offered
through writings/teachings of the true way (sacrifice by way of the passion). "At
The Real Life's Return" Eutopia/nirvana will be re-established (a return to the
Garden of Eden);
"...the life bathed in perfection
that life that He first purposed
back there "in the beginning."
Thanks for sharing this well thoughtout poem following Holy Week (March 20-27). TLW