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The Climbing Levels Ether floats, pure, purged of every earthly taint: Did the Wisdom divide the earth’s orb with this same Honey? Under Great conifers, ruffled at home on the high hills, Hid castrated Saturn. Every corner he gave the bright ground of heaven’s Shawl Till earth and sea seemed one – a single sea. Age, Flood, Lycaon, Lesser gods came hurrying. Eventually the Maker, conceiving a holier revision— Skyfuls of fist, quaking the earth— Fired dust and slaked it with the pure spring water. Rushing up through the elements Of ours was the mighty God: He wanted us to think Him Me (and so attempted to do away with me) Or some common rascal: Vulcan, the god of fire In the atom Deep. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas Edward Wright On Date: 2005-10-06 18:28:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Adam. Not Atom. You're reading the wrong ledger.
I'm thinking of -
well, it's not cricket. Or peanut butter.
You're on fire. Keep at it.
tw.