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Light Tones and Horses Playing
Still cold air teased into steaming by a steel blue stallion preening Tossing head and earth stamping for his lady so deeply taken One moment elegant in its hesitation
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-04-06 16:45:51
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
James, As I critique, I see my voting power increase my 'possibilities' list. I don't usually pay attention to those details. Your poem is good....thoughtful. Wondering what is going through the horses mind. Horses are pretty sensual. I think I need a cold shower. Isn't life a kick? Dellena
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