This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2008-03-08 23:04:50 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Light Tones and Horses Playing

Still cold air teased into steaming  by a steel blue stallion preening Tossing head and earth stamping  for his lady so deeply taken One moment elegant in its hesitation

Copyright © March 2008 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2008-04-06 16:45:51
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
James, As I critique, I see my voting power increase my 'possibilities' list. I don't usually pay attention to those details. Your poem is good....thoughtful. Wondering what is going through the horses mind. Horses are pretty sensual. I think I need a cold shower. Isn't life a kick? Dellena

This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2008-03-08 23:39:13
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Beautifully penned the images you have created within these lines. steel blue stallion preening tossing head and earth stamping.........I am sure his lady was deeply taken can feel the still cold air and see the steam coming from the stallion's nostrils......I so love to watch horses especially at play or in the dating sense of the words. Thanks for posting, should make the list for the month, God Bless, Claire
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