This Poem was Submitted By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-05-01 23:42:23 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My April Votes

 Points: 18.7097 Into Turn submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-04-14 09:30:05  Points: 16.83873 The Blossoms Eye submitted by James Edward Schanne on 2009-04-29 15:17:54  Points: 14.96776 With In submitted by Lora Silvey on 2009-04-14 23:17:25  Points: 
.09679 Spaces submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-04-27 17:41:07  Points: 11.22582 Mother's Boy submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-04-30 
:47:43  Points: 9.35485 So Alone submitted by Terry Anctil on 2009-04-10 12:38:41  Points: 7.48388 On A Wing submitted by Regis L Chapman on 2009-04-18 00:12:05

Copyright © May 2009 Duane J Jackson


This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-05-31 08:32:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Again, I am flattered by your regard. Only wish Mr. Schanne had shown the consideration to have at least replied to some of his critiques. That verges on the indecent. Just as no one can justify giving a critque, any critique, less than a 10 when they give no critque to the poems of others. There's an arrogance here... or worse, an unwillingness to grow and develop that part of poetic discernment, an ability with the critique. Duane, if you agree with me, please consider sharing this with the forum since I can't. Thank you again, JCH


This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-05-15 08:00:47
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Duane....often read most poetry more then once and this month has been especially good for that. So much talent on this site......thanks for your continued posts....always a pleasure to find one on my list for the month. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2009-05-14 14:46:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Thank you for the vote of confidence....I like your selections.. L
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-05-13 08:00:30
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Duane; April was a good month for TPL. I'm patiently waiting for poems to critique for May. I was also glad to see Dellena ranked #1 - All of the above were worth being in the top - although I didn't think my poem Mother's Boy would rank higher than the others - just hoping the emotional pull isn't what it was voted for - I've put one in for May - hope you're getting ready to post soon. blessings, Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claus Michael Ranswill On Date: 2009-05-02 20:34:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
this has been quite a month for all of us, thanks for sharing mine didnt come in too good either keep going claus
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