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Heal - To Trust Is Bliss Dark shadows; Minute figments timed with split imagination, Where the mind needs to rise higher, believe and breathe in, Then leave before passion is robbed from your soul forever. One circle connects to another on and on. Dancing 'neath low stills the band for life's background music, Where you cradle your weary thoughts ending the climax, Before you come to enjoy existence in natural essence. The ultimate in life is flying over fires from hell Torching rebelled bridges you’ve crossed Stealing dead spirit from awakening From a temporary pit stop that tomorrow's unseen will be. If you rush to meet the sun with courage, A heavenly shield built to climb ivy will grow tall, Free burdens ‘till figments are dead, scarce and small. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-06-02 17:55:02
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
DeniMari,
I think you 'got' it!
As to fully living courage, it is difficult but is possible.
You should frame this to be read whenever it proves necessary.
You have flown over some fires from hell and you are coming full circle into your own.
That is parts of the graces you receive for the price of the negative misery.
Thank you for sharing your growth.
Dellena