This Poem was Submitted By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-09-02 23:37:54 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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.3333 Unsettled submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-08-26 
:18:24  Points: 11.99997 eHarmony submitted by Terry Anctil on 2009-08-10 00:03:
 Points: 10.66664 The Lost Magi (Revised) submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-08-16 11:21:47  Points: 9.33331 Of the Resurrection of the Dead submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-08-17 14:39:06  Points: 7.99998 A Prose Poem submitted by Terry Anctil on 2009-08-10 22:40:25  Points: 6.66665 Jester of Life submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-08-21 21:03:54  Points: 5.33332 Yoyo submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-08-26 15:06:53  Points: 3.99999 Peer Pressure submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-08-03 01:46:47  Points: 2.66666 Soul Mates submitted by Debbie Spicer on 2009-08-26 00:55:34

Copyright © September 2009 Duane J Jackson

This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Steven Scheffer On Date: 2009-10-06 23:02:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Duane, This seems like centuries ago. It was quite a month; I feel liked I aged twenty years . . . or got twenty years younger. This seems like ancient history. Keep up the good work. MSS

This Poem was Critiqued By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-09-13 23:19:49
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
You and I were close together on the votes this month. Happy you felt like me over, eHarmony. I respond to these votes not for credits but because I'm banned from the forum and this is an opportunity for me to be heard. MAH has suggested that the forum may be the better place to post the votes and I agree...of course excepting myself. It would be good if we didn't have to vote on responses like this, but if you don't then you can't post a poem. And of course Chris can't be bothered. Maybe there's a ceremony to reach him. A pentagram or something. Try burning a candle to Shiva for me, will you? JCH
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-09-10 08:41:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.66667
Hey Duane, looks like everyone was in sinc with JC's Unsettled - I absolutely loved it. Hope to see more like this for September. One poem on my list was posted by Terry, but she eliminated it for edits; and I can't wait to see it back here. Thank you for your votes on my posts - I'm trying to get as good as the rest of you here - if not for you & others I'd still be drifting with line to line - blessings, Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-09-07 23:24:21
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
It is always nice to see what attracts within the lines of poetry and your choices for the month appear to appeal to others as well. Thank you for taking the time to not only be a part of this site actively by posting and critiquing but also by responding in so many other ways. Looking forward to September's list of entries. God Bless, Claire
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