This Poem was Submitted By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-10-05 12:39:19 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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September Votes

Points: 26.2857 The Arrow submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-11 19:43:36 Points: 23.657
 Blood submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-09-25 01:06:55 Points: 21.02856 Of the Resurrection of the Dead submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-08 21:57:27 Points: 18.39999 A Calming Spell submitted by Duane J Jackson on 2009-09-15 01:33:08 Points: 15.77142 Mater submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-09 21:29:14 Points: 
.14285 breaks my heart submitted by Christina J Morrow on 2009-09-05 20:46:10 Points: 10.51428 The Tag Along submitted by James C. Horak on 2009-09-
 19:15:10 Points: 7.88571 Careful submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-03 20:41:38 Points: 5.25714 Steps submitted by Regis L Chapman on 2009-09-02 21:28:25 Points: 2.62857 At Home with the Sleeping submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-06 15:02:41 Guys you blew us out of the water this month; and it was a great challenge;  Hoping October posts & critiques stay up, Great month with some memorable pieces, blessings, Deni

Copyright © October 2009 DeniMari Z.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-10-11 21:54:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Deni, Looks like you went 'A Calming Spell' rather than 'Desertion' which seemed to be much stronger in others' opinions. I'm glad you did give 'a calming spell' some mention because I enjoyed writing it a lot more than I did, 'desertion'. Good vote with some fine choices. Duane.

This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-10-08 00:51:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Cetainly agree it was a great month for poetry and it looks like October is off to a great start as well. Looking forward to your work for it always touches my heart. God Bless, Claire
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