This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-11-02 17:49:10 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My October Vote

 Points: 15.7576 The fisher king submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-10-07 23:44:20  Points: 14.18184 Riverbed submitted by Duane J Jackson on 2009-10-04 01:18:20  Points: 12.60608 Treasure and Treachery submitted by Lora Silvey on 2009-10-24 14:37:42  Points: 11.03032 Whittling submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-10-
 18:45:03  Points: 9.45456 Beachcombing submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-10-05 04:22:52  Points: 7.8788 Pain In The Beginning & End submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-10-06 01:12:24 It would be a joyful thing to me to see MAH rewrite, Beachcombing...but then he most likely won' I'll stumble out where I think it should fall as it is. I was quite taken with Duane's, Riverbed, and imagined that magical bed of fossils I found as a boy in a creek bed. We miss MSS and await his return, Terry as well. Lora has graced us, though a bit moody this month. Still, I enjoyed her, Treasure and Treachery, finding its theme the most significant for the month. DeniMari is in an experimenting mood and has started rewriting with a flair. Something we all need to oblige our Muse, from time to time.  People are venturing into ideascape to develop poems and getting away from the too personal. That's a big part of the successful poem and I'm seeing it more and more. JCH

Copyright © November 2009 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2009-12-02 15:33:16
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
Thank you James for the vote-- you made some great choices. Lora

This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-11-08 08:20:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Amen James....always enjoy your work, your choices and your honesty with everyone here on the link. May Novembr bring forth many new creations for the offering...God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-11-07 01:23:10
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Good choices, and thank you for your continued encouragement. Where is MSS? & Terry? Hopefully we'll see them back this month. Best wishes to you, & blessings, Deni
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