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Darkness Death is all around me Its everywhere I go Lurking in the shadows Encouraging me to slip across the line To the dark side Waiting to set me free So many people Grim reaper,please let them go Young,old,innocent,violent Sometimes such a waste Death surrounds me on all sides No exit,no escape,darkness all around No light to guide me Only shadows of darkness where I can hide Release your grip within thee So once more I can walk with pride That cold dark feeling won`t let go Makes me feel so lonely,makes me feel so mean Beckoning,pushing me towards that line Of the dark side Death is all around me,everywhere I go That cold dark feeling won`t let go |
Additional Notes:
Death is sort of a "taboo" subject,I had to go there to see what I could write.....
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2010-03-31 18:26:20
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Michael,
Death is death. Same as life is life. We all gotta do it.
This feels like death almost stalks us. So many are dying/more than usual it seems. And
that is true. The shadow government/world bankers are aiming for depopulation.
That is why one needs to be careful what you breath, eat, think and do.
[seriously] take in only good!
If the world's energy turns wrong all will be pure evil. Pray and
work toward love. It being our main weapon.
The dark feeling of this poem never let up it challenged me to answer.
That's pretty powerful. Good projection of perplexity.
Dellena