This Poem was Submitted By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2010-11-20 17:37:04 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Dancing Days

Birthed into infinity's space  the stage of life’s totality Aligned with the moon influenced by the stars Linked to the place that  has no beginning nor end Relative to everything  man pulsates to creation's tune Dancing to the end of time  till the world's edge declines Earth's trance we may find  isn’t as it appeared or seemed

Copyright © November 2010 Dellena Rovito

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2010-12-01 09:28:00
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Gorgeous poem Dellena! I love so much in this write especially the imagery. So very true in each of your verses of life - and ending so apropos of the earth and world on how much is an illusion - On my list for November - one of your best this year. blessings always, Deni

This Poem was Critiqued By: Tony P Spicuglia On Date: 2010-11-28 13:02:04
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dellena, HA!! finally got to your verse. There were a lot of submittals this month (good!) and I pretty much couldn’t start till late. Wonderful piece. It takes the obvious unseen, and turns it into the obscure to be seen. The effect of the reality in this piece is stunning. I writer (am writing) two novels that touch on much of what you said; and you put it into a nutshell that makes sense to any sensibility. Bravo! Well Done!
This Poem was Critiqued By: cheyenne smyth On Date: 2010-11-27 17:49:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.69231
Hi Dellena, This is a fabulous free verse poem. I have enjoyed reading it several times and each time I like it better. You have excellent phrasing and word selection which makes this poem a joy to read. I agree that things are not always like they of the disappointments in life. Well done. Best wishes, cheyenne
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mandie J Overocker On Date: 2010-11-21 09:53:40
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.70000
Dellena, This is a gem. I love the images you have penned here and there seems to be a subtle rhyme here and there - just enough to whet the appetite. I think your title is true when we get caught up in the 'dance' that we sometimes don't realize what is really happening around us. And Earth, our life on it, can certainly be entrancing at times...A delightful read - well done! Mandie
This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2010-11-20 18:12:08
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.80000
Dellena, How nice to be greeted by one of your wonderful poems. I really liked this one. Your word choices are delightful while your flow is smooth allowing for a pleasureable read. You create a feeling of zen, deep and contemplative and so sage. Your words ring true and in the fini', things are never as they have percieved. This is phenomenal, roses at your feet and kudos my friend. Wadoh, Lora
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