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Motherly Love You gave me my first kiss that showed me love “God” placed me in your arms a blessing from “Heaven” above. You shared knowledge and wisdom which taught me how to live. So many of your days spending time with me showing me how to give. You gave me courage, strength and pride were always near when I felt sad and cried. A bond was formed between us that has lasted all these years. Yours was the only voice that chased away my fears. With your love surrounding me day after day the comfort I could depend on let me grow up in a very secure way. You let my spirit soar loved me just for who I am. With “Gods” best intentions it was a beautiful plan. Thank you Mom today and everyday for loving me in your own special way! |
Additional Notes:
Rewrite of an older poem of mine called "Mothers Way" reworked to pay honor to all Moms for Mother's Day -
RIP Mom - Love and miss you so much.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Ashni Irey On Date: 2012-05-31 09:08:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dearest Deni,
A lovely tribute to your mother and all mothers. :)
I had some trouble with the punctuation on several lines that ended with a period that I didn't think was necessary since the following line was continuous. Other than that, a simple poem neatly written... and a very happy Mother's Day to you as well! :)
Hugs,
Ash