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Displaying Critiques 1 to 2 out of 2 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Elaine Anne Westheimer | Critique Date |
| Foundation Work | hello haveaniceday | Barbara, this is strong poetry that has a definite rhyming and rhythm scheme. It's one to read more than once. Lots of particular images that could pertain to a variety of issues. I particularly like the third stanza. Your "Listen" refers to the vision of a knife but nevertheless gives the reader the essence of hearing. There is also a call to action feeling in the stanza. The last stanza puts me in mind of a soldier at war who can't analyze what has to be done until later. Overall the poem could be about almost any situational emotion: love, regret, depression, bitterness. For curiosity's sake, I'd like to know the theme of the poem. However, you've gathered powerful lines that with or without explanation, make for fine poetry, and a lasting impression. --Elaine | 2005-03-31 11:44:34 |
| Math | Moira Grace Hamel-Smith | Moira, your poem caught my attention with its originality. The first two stanzas are concise and poetic. The third stanza, too, was reading well until evolution. But, as "quo" and "Maslow ," "way" with "anyway" and "everyday" are the only rhyming places, they are inconsistent with the rest of the poem. The content of the poem shows much potential. Consider re-working the many "is" and "are" verbs into more active ones. For instance, and this may not be a good example of what you want to say: "Physics calculates art, music plays on physics." Try to pune "The trick" stanza down to its essence. The last stanza has rhythm, active verbs and ends well. Hope this helps, Elaine | 2005-03-30 10:14:14 |
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