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Occupation,Revelation Out on a night,hot on the town Running my hand up and down Right inside your gown Occupation Revelation I know you think your too good for me I could love you for all the world to see Passion,oh yeah! Revelation Occupation Walking on down the street Looking for a pretty girl to meet Loving you would be oh so sweet Occupation Revelation Or is it passion? Pretty girls all over the town,going here and all around Walking here,dancing there,tippy toes on the ground Oh no! not again! Here we go,round and round Out on a night,hot on the town Running my hand up and down Passion! makes the world go round Revelation Occupation |
Additional Notes:
From one of those hot nights out on the town
This Poem was Critiqued By: Thomas H. Smihula On Date: 2003-10-07 21:40:25
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.45098
Michael I see this as lyrics for a song with the refrain
being the Revelation, Occupation. You have structured
this in such a manor as to accommodate song. Couldn't
understand why the flip-flop with the refrain unless
it was to reflect the question about passion. Now all
I need to hear is the music that goes with it. Well done.
Thanks for sharing. Tom