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Gerald O'Reilly Forsaken, ravaged children, Forsaken, ravaged children. Gerald O'Reilly fondles himself as he lies in the dark on his bed, gun to his head, flickering candles, silently dancing on crosses affixed to the walls, the hammer falls. Forsaken, ravaged children, someone must take the blame. Forsaken, ravaged children, to rescue no one came. Father Loquacious, teaching young Arthur the joys of pure fatherly love, in the vestry above, touching young Arthur in ways he touched Gerald those days not so long ago, no one will know. Forsaken, ravaged chidren, someone must take the blame. Forsaken, ravaged children, to rescue no one came. Gerald O'Reilly, denied last communion and placed in unholy ground, no salvation found, Father Loquacious, saved by the silence of lives he profoundly changed, dead or deranged. Forsaken, ravaged children, someone must take the blame. Forsaken, ravaged children, to rescue no one came. See the forsaken, ravaged children. See the forsaken, ravaged children. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Sean Donaghy On Date: 2003-12-06 11:10:06
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 8.86111
Leo - We borrow from the Beatles, eh? A bit of "Elinor Rigby" - No harm there - Dylan
borrowed melodies and form from many places (Woody Guthrie, The Childe Ballads) and it
served him well. The problem for me is, instead of paying attention to your message,
I keep hearing Paul McCartney singing in my head.
Thanks for the read
Sean