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The Dance Of The Snowflakes The dance of the snowflakes as they dust the vast horizon in titanium winter white each one a Picasso in shape, an original, minute, free form ice sculpture, from the abstract to the unobtrusive, from the symetrical to the intricate. The imprinted wonders glistening in beauty, adhearing to our lashes, brows and clothes stinging our skin, burning our toes. Composed menagerie among the inclement weather, inordinate in its falling, enticing us to observe, to touch, to step into a second childhood! |
This Poem was Critiqued By: marilyn terwilleger On Date: 2005-03-05 12:12:33
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.89655
Hi Sheryl,
This poem really appeals to me as I am a nature lover and write many poems about it. I have lived
where it snows a lot all my life and the snowflake is a wonder. They say there are no two alike and
when Mother Nature dumps a foot of snow I wonder how that could be! In the piece you have captured the
true essence of the snowflake...'they dust the vast horizon in titanium winter white' beautiful
descriptors...'original, minute, free form ice sculpture, from the abstract to the obotrusive, from the
symetrical to the intricate.' very apt images of the the mystic snowflake and its beauty. I use the
word 'mystic' because that is exactly what they are...a true wonder that is complicated but accepted
as normal among us....'the imprinted wonders glistening in beauty, adhearing to our lashes, brows and
clothes stinging our skin, and burning our toes' these words give me a perfect image of a soft and
gentle snowing which is so common where I live. Of course we also have our share of snow storms which I
refer to as horizontal snow because the winds are often fierce. I especially like the way you have ended
this piece...'enticing us to observe, to touch, to step into a second childhood!' Well done!
Blessings....Marilyn