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In His Love, I Want to Live Moments, in the breath of new dawn; Jesus claims my heart in love alike to divine. Trembling in this sensation, stilled by this affection; Mystic joy feeds my spirit - satisfied yet still in search Of the deeper bond my soul is praying for. All senses alerted and waiting to walk the path By believing, by knowing, by wanting Every moment I have living to follow him home. Having been damned, forgotten and betrayed. With no strong source or force to lift me; To wits end, and then again to it. Too many times to count out now. Scars could bleed, yet each lesson seemed out of reach. Till now, vaguely bewildered by it all I pushed through the fog, to the light, to his heart. Fought like the devil for his love. So dawn, is peace, in peace I pray For this prince to believe in my life all the way. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-03-15 07:26:35
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
When giving reference to the Lord I always capitalize the first letter, Prince, Him, His...just a thought....He is Lord......enjoyed the read very much; we all have struggles in our walk through life and your being able to put into words all the times you fought to be saved, the road you choose to follow the Lord in your own walk, the images created with the flare of your pen......they all work very well together.
My own breath caught as I read the first stanza for it is so true how one feels when they come to know and accept the Lord into their lives. Each day is a new beginning, clean and fresh, each day brings you closer and closer to that intense feeling of pure joy and the best is that He will never leave you if you fall and fail Him in any way. Thanks for posting and for sharing, may your walk with the Lord continue to bring you total peace, love and joy........God Bless, Claire