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mitkos Did she hurt you baby? I know she did come here let me hold you let me make this ok it won’t be ok not right now in the morning (I promise) you’ll feel differently not great not even good and certainly not perfect but I know you’ll feel differently use me take from me what I will give you freely you’re my family finally I have found out what true love is not the feeling you get when you lay eyes on someone for the first time not the feeling you get when someone kisses you not the feeling of being loved the feeling of loving true love is the feeling of loving goddamn someone quote me I am as brilliant as Descartes Socrates Berekely you I am as brilliant as you as brilliant as my eyes can comprehend as brilliant as my eyes can see you are beautiful you don’t deserve hurt like this let me take you inside let me fix you i can’t fix you don’t let me be over-romantic don’t let me be dramatic don’t let me be please don’t let me be I promise I’ll be there when you wake up there when you fall asleep there thinking about you in between my sheets rustle because I cannot sleep without you there there is little but there is fear fear you have always understood even when you pretended not to pretended not to notice my tears pretended to care you used me like every... but pay no mind you need me now finally (family?) i was scared i was alone nothing would stay down you got angry you got violent you got me better and now i am better like never before you never needed me before but now she hurt you baby? I know she did. |
Additional Notes:
The title is a Bulgarian slang word. I believe it means "one of many lovers." I am hoping it doesn't mean "one who HAS many lovers" or... "prostitute."
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2007-04-07 17:04:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.76190
Just letting you know I stopped by to read this poem and found it quite interesting, full of emotions and images which you have created with the flare of your pen. Thanks for taking the time to share. God Bless, Claire