This Poem was Submitted By: Kenneth R. Patton On Date: 2009-01-29 11:47:27 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Sleet and Freezing Rain

We chose our clothes carefully We wanted the color  to match the day So We both donned New England gray and proceeded out the door unnoticed

Copyright © January 2009 Kenneth R. Patton

Additional Notes:
Just a mood thing

This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-02-06 09:10:07
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.90000
Indeed it has been bleak, cold, dreary here in New England for too many days extending into weeks now. You have penned exactly the sight one would see should they venture into New England at this time of the year....Though I might have dreamed it I did hear Spring is right around the corner ad don't beiee a thing the ground hog might add........stay well, stay warm, nice finding you on my list this morning. God Bless, Claire

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-02-01 00:10:38
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Kenneth, We should wear lots of gray....... And we would be unnoticed. I like your word play. I want to wear yellow and be unnoticed. Fun work. Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-01-29 22:17:54
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.92308
Hi Kenneth, Short but deep...I get a sense of a couple who are going about their ways..separated by an ice like chill..perhaps over a disagreement or argument..I like the crispness of this moving picture...coats on and out the door in a jiffy !! Duane.
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