This Poem was Submitted By: James C. Horak On Date: 2009-10-06 21:58:35 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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My September Vote

 Points: 21.1111 Ventriloquist submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-24 16:09:19  Points: 18.99999 Desertion submitted by Duane J Jackson on 2009-09-10 00:15:49  Points: 16.88888 The Night Sky submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-16 02:00:42  Points: 14.77777 To Withstand the Storm submitted by Dellena Rovito on 2009-09-14 23:49:07  Points: 12.66666 At Home with the Sleeping submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-06 15:02:41  Points: 10.55555 The Arrow submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-11 19:43:36  Points: 8.44444 Twisted Rules of Life submitted by DeniMari Z. on 2009-09-09 23:31:42  Points: 6.33333 Self-Portrait (through the eyes of Vallejo) submitted by Mark Steven Scheffer on 2009-09-09 18:05:15  Points: 4.22222 A Calming Spell submitted by Duane J Jackson on 2009-09-15 01:33:08  Points: 2.11111 Two views of dna submitted by Mark Andrew Hislop on 2009-09-
 00:51:03  Steps submitted by Regis L Chapman on 2009-09-02 21:28:25 A delightful month. Poems of depth, craftmanship, themes woven of wonderful illusion, everything one could wish. Several poems would be more successful if rewritten. For those with such poems,or any wishing to rewrite, I offer submission points. Mr. Chapman has such a poem and it is a work of promise, the best of his I've read. How about five submission credits, Mr. Chapman? If you'll rewrite what could be a wonderful poem.  Although both of our Marks labored diligently and produced wonderfully this month, Duane's, Desertion struck me with quite an did Dellena's, To Withstand the Storm. We miss Lora and look forward to her poems when she's feeling better.  I'm still wondering how we can top this month.  JCH 

Copyright © October 2009 James C. Horak

This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-10-11 21:50:24
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi James, Thanks for your appreciation of 'Desertion'. Here's looking forward to October ! Duane.

This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-10-09 12:47:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
JC, I agree - we had many stimulating posts, so much better than August. My only concern with Septembers outcome, is I read poems much better than Twisted Rules of Life, and was happy just knowing I'd be getting come credits for critiquing. MSS, MAH, you & Duane held strong through the entire month. Thank you for your confidence with my poem, I'm going to post less, see if I can improve my quality - without just hitting that submit button, before it's too late. blessings, Deni
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-10-08 01:03:37
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
It seems like the month is off to a good start with its new offerings......we are fortunate to have so many talented poets on this site.....God Bless, Claire
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