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Chains of Command You can get a lot of thinking done when there's time to do it. Today's headlines bombarded my thoughts: mistreatment of Iraqi prisoners, the Heinz papers released, the usual . . . Bush, Cheyney and Rumsfeld working co-herently to squash any thoughts of presidential impeachment ie. simultaneously making a fortune and saving their asses (smile). I'll tell you. I'm still trying to figure out why America would even allow anybody to be a Commander-in-Chief without having had a real military command in the U.S. Armed forces. White people are still doing the damndest things. They make the rules, disobey the rules, and then change the rules. It's the circle of life. Almost 3 years to the anniversary of 9/11, and still no justice for the terroristic slaughter that befell our nation. I'm about preached out on this one. Every preacher, pastor, philosopher and primary spokesperson seems to have the right idea, the right message, the right lead, the right reaction. I'm following my heart. I'm listening to the voices of the dead. And they tell me that both politics and religion are overrated. That's a shame, because it's what life offers to us all. It is what life has offered me. One day it stood before me with a Bible in one hand and a white man's world in the other. I'm still not sure whether I've chosen either hand without wanting to reap the benefits of the other. You call it human. I call it crazy. I call it confusing, mixed up, messed up . . . a damned shame. This is what we are made of, what we face each day we wake up, chains of command changing the command to chains for the man. |
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2005-06-06 13:03:52
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.85714
Dear Latorial,
This is deep, and wonderfully stated, and the last verse, wraps up your poem perfectly. So many questions, no answers - we all are faced with the morose reality of our country, society and hands are tied. It seems to me corruption rules the roost, America this corporation is blindly going to get worse without a chance of getting better, and here we sit, the pions with no voice - to make sense of it all.
Brilliant piece, I'm glad I read this one.
DeniMari