This Poem was Submitted By: arvin r. reder On Date: 2005-11-08 16:10:30 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Arctic Roads

Driving a long winter road trail, through tree lined forests standing tall, Where north winds blow with out fail, carrying a wolves lamented call. Roads with portages and slow turns, Only a winter storm's curtain can close, A bed of ice the cold night froze, Missing warmth as a late fire burns. The road runs six hundred miles long, slow shallow lazy drifting snow, The wind in the pines sings a song, The engine hums with load in tow. Northern songs are the only sound, Like the sound of tires weeping, as the wheels turn slowly creeping, Carefully pulling over ground. Yielding to empties heading south, greeting voices over radios bark, smoke drifting from their mouth, wide eyes penetrating the dark. A mind tiring straggling sleep, Needing rest but you never will, Sweeping urges climbing a hill, Then frozen waters running deep. On and on over each portage ramp, six hundred miles the journey ends, beyond the trees a winter camp, food, hot coffee, greeting old friends Your destination almost near, a searching beacon to the north, You gear down climbing and surge forth Lights sweep horizons of it's fear. Long long is the winter road trail, Where the cold snow blows without fail, The night has passed and the driver sees, The furl baron hills hold no trees.

Copyright © November 2005 arvin r. reder

Additional Notes:
Dedicated to all the drivers that make the run on the arctic winter roads from Yellowknife to the diamond and gold mines in northern Canada...


This Poem was Critiqued By: arnie s WACHMAN On Date: 2005-11-29 19:08:29
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.70968
Oh Arvin, I drove that highway once starting out from Grande Prairie, Alberta. Drove through 'til Yellowknife. Got stranded there after the breakup, and had to wait for the ferry a couple of weeks. Very costly affair. Good poem which outlines the winter road really well.


This Poem was Critiqued By: Lora Silvey On Date: 2005-11-25 15:02:45
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Arvin, I just had to comment and say thank you. My husband for many years drove in treacherous climate and I've always felt that men that do this type of job are so under appreciated. Your poem sang to me as if it were song, your words fell in perfection with color and images. Perhaps you should see about having this made into a song, a tribute of sorts to the Artic Truckers....it would be great. Anyway, your offering was much appreciated and enjoyed by this reader. IMHO, it is well structured with an easy flow, clear verbiage that paints accurate images of the life of an Artic Trucker. Thank you for this delightful poem. Best always, Lora
This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2005-11-16 01:21:56
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Arvin, Thanks for this drive down all these roads. As cumbersome as the journey might be, you have given us visuals along with an attention to detail that gives the reader a greater sense of the sounds, images and distances of such trips. I appreciate your attempts at putting in some audio as well with the sounds of screeching tires, the radio's bark, etc. I'm not really sure what specific poetic form you have used, actually. You might want to enlighten me as I noticed some different fomat between verses 2,4,6 and 8 and the others. Thanks for the ride. Take care, Duane.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2005-11-12 15:08:44
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Arvin, I've been on a few 'runs' in my life. It gets looooooooong and tedious. Writing a poem in yur mind is an excellant way to keep your mind alert! Which is so vital to continuing living.. When there's little new to view it's easy to fall asleep.[as you say] But it's certaily ahard thing to do. Lots of will power to not sucumb to sleep. I think your poem pulled me down your highway. It was exactly describing your trip. The length accented the miles. The snow, the cold, I tasted the coffee and even felt the stark lights in the room, even though you didn't mention them.[I just knew] Any scales? Check your tires? Really good job. Dellena
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2005-11-09 06:38:48
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
Hi Poet.....have not much to say but I certainly do like this one, being the wife of a truck driver I appreciate the fact that he is not driving those Arctic Roads you speak of........for your words certainly do describe a long, cold, lonely run with perhaps much to be leary about.....Actually this should probably be made into a song for I am so able to see the visuals presented with each stanza......I can hear the sound of the voices on the CB's greeting each other as they pass in the night, and I can wonder how they stay awake during such a long and lonely run. Thanks for posting and sharing with us, are you a trucker as well as a poet? God Bless, Claire
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