This Poem was Submitted By: Kenneth R. Patton On Date: 2009-09-02 10:13:06 . . . Click Here To Mail this Poem to a Friend!

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Love Stands

Why should I be dissatisfied writing love poems? I am in love of what else should I write? If I long to write about profound, deep  and mysterious things of life What can match love? If I choose the uncertain The upsetting The roller coaster ride Love has no equal If I am attempting to get at the core Some ultimate final meaning Love stands alone

Copyright © September 2009 Kenneth R. Patton

This Poem was Critiqued By: Dellena Rovito On Date: 2009-09-21 00:26:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Kenneth, One writes for what one feels. Love is the only thing that matters in all of life. Loving our brothers would bring us peace. Loving God, loving family, loving friends..supporting life, animals and all. Your subject encompasses us all. Good job Kenneth Dellena

This Poem was Critiqued By: Duane J Jackson On Date: 2009-09-16 23:22:05
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Hi Kenneth, There is no equal. I agree completely. Through the verses of your piece you have shown and reminded us that love will always have an over-arching influence of on poets... 'Love stands alone' - nice to see a post from you after quite some time. Duane.
This Poem was Critiqued By: Mark Andrew Hislop On Date: 2009-09-10 00:02:50
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 10.00000
Dear Kenneth I'm sure you're right. It's been what seems forever since I felt it quite as keenly as you do. I'm jealous. Best wishes Mark
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2009-09-07 19:45:40
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
and with that my friend you have said it all..........hope you and yours are well holds no strings that you do not care to be attached to....and I can see from so many of your postings that you are in love. God Bless, Claire
This Poem was Critiqued By: DeniMari Z. On Date: 2009-09-03 01:11:53
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 1.00000
- Love; you're absolutely right - Love matters where all else fails - perhaps the finest emotion in life; to love a person, place or thing - an activity - I'm pleased to know love is the foundation of your daily life - you are truly blessed, Good verbiage, short on imagery but not necessary when stating feelings in pure simplistic fashion. Very nicely done. blessings, Deni
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