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The Shepard He is a humble man who needs little to survive. He loves grassy plateaus, his burlap topped wagon, icy streams and his flock. He is the Shepard Just before dawn, when sky is crimson and sunrise likens lemon rind, he sits on a verdant knoll and waits for flush of light when his sheep awake from night. He sees suckling lambs, patient ewes with curly fleece, and restless rams that shake horned heads and look about. He feeds his sheep, patrols the fold, bewilders big cats and wolves, and ponders death. Who will tend his sheep? Will little lambs still play and leap? He knows life goes not backward nor dallies in yesterday but swells forward to live in tomorrow. He is steward of the land Keeper of the gate Savior of the flock He is the Shepard |
This Poem was Critiqued By: Claire H. Currier On Date: 2005-05-04 06:30:22
Critiquer Rating During Critique: 9.32075
Indeed, a humble man He was............the Shepherd.......you could be referring to John the Baptist within these lines or perhaps Jesus........both Shepherd's............good structure, your word flow brings us there to where this Shepherd is tending his flock whether they are sheep or men......makes no difference.......his love is pure and so full of meaning for those that listen......thus He is feeding his flock...........Makes no difference to this reader who the Shepherd refers to..........it just fills my heart and soul and that is all that matters......thank you for posting, God certainly continues to bless your work. Claire