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Poem Title	Poet Name	Critique Given by James Edward Schanne	Critique Date
Senior Moments	DeniMari Z.	At the end of this one I just wanted to say Amen, its quit a remarkable prayer/poem Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 14:55:24
GrandMemeres Love (First poem)	Joanne Duval Morgan	Sounds like a good first poem and children and grandchildren are always an inspiration.thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 13:57:59
Great Blue Heron Sighting	Joanne M Uppendahl	this reminds me of when I was about ten, that summer a blue heron made its summer home at a pond near our home. I would go watch it for the longest time, but after it left in the fall it never came back again except of course in my memories, thanks for bringing that memory back to me.	2004-11-29 13:51:38
Electrifying Remembrance of "Don't do that!"	Paul R Lindenmeyer	Sounds like you were the conductor of a shocking truth, Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 13:47:04
Last Milk	Kenneth R. Patton	The knowledge that we're on our own can strike us unaware and then its a matter of how we deal with it of course. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 13:16:45
The Clock	Patricia Gibson-Williams	My wife and I have been trying for a second child for the last couple of years, but now that she's just turned 45 she feels like it just isn't going to happen for us, and she can hear the tick tock of your poem very clearly. Thanks for letting me read a poem that hits so close to home.	2004-11-29 11:43:08
Lost Magic	Kenneth R. Patton	My father seemed to get very old over night in 1981( he died feb. 1982 ) it is very sobering to realize and think upon your own aging but also appreciate things a bit more too. Thats what your poem reminds me. Thanks for letting me read and comment .	2004-11-29 11:32:24
Be There	Regis L Chapman	I really like the crunchy part of the soul bit especially coming on the heals of the salad line makes me think of a waldorf salad, does that mean my soul is a walnut? Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 11:28:22
Blood and roses.	Keith Robson	You planted in my minds garden the picture of a rose bluming in the mists of battle, not because of but in spite of the brutalty surrounding it. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 10:53:59
My wretched shower	Mark Andrew Hislop	This one sounds regretful of something perhaps that could have been that somehow was allowed to go, and makes me think that there are those things that can not be washed away. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 10:49:33
This Guy Walked into the Dover Beach Starbuck's	Thomas Edward Wright	this poems perculating with ideas, after a couple of readings I'm not sure of anything I would filter out. Maybe after I have a bit more caffine something will drip into my grounds and wake up a mindfull critique. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 10:40:03
All Things Pass	Kenneth R. Patton	Your note helped me connect with this poem because otherwise I wouldn't have connected the last line with the rest of the poem or at least not easily. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-29 10:28:03
verse 65 (Black Forest)	Erzahl Leo M. Espino	apples surrounded flaky skulls' juicy thinking liberation calls Well that was my dissert!	2004-11-26 08:39:47
B-Rated Love Affair	DeniMari Z.	This poem seems to follow a relationship from hopefull beginings through turbulent times that isolate the pair from each other till there was no bond left between. Thanks for an interesting read.	2004-11-24 09:26:52
verse 64 (Doubts)	Erzahl Leo M. Espino	I imagine thoughts struggling in a spiders web trying to escape with a spider closing in ready to bite and wrap up this tasty morsel and so: struggling deepens ideas in their tangles poisoned silk entraps Thanks for letting me read and comment. Always fun!	2004-11-24 08:52:04
Weathering	Regis L Chapman	On first reading I certainly didn't think of women so I had to reread with your note in mind. I can only really see it in the line: found beyond beckoning except by trust Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-23 09:41:37
Mist	Regis L Chapman	This one moves well, flows off my mental tongue although min the line: self is a ocean, a drop, a mist, a dew I think the a before ocean ougjht to be an I like the progression of the droplets of water, Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-11-22 15:41:03
Whispers (haiku)	marilyn terwilleger	I picture a stage with the curtains slowly opening to reveal the mornings soul, although the gives rise for me the question of what the mornings' soul looks like, I'm not sure but I keep pictureing a heart which turns to pure light for some reason. Thanks for letting me read and comment .	2004-11-16 08:41:05
Solitude	Thomas H. Smihula	being alone can often be a cleansing experience, I know I need it from time to time to reinvigorate the mind and senses so your poem captures the way I think of solitude, well done I think.	2004-11-10 17:25:07
In my mind's eye.	Keith Robson	This poem flows off the tongue well, and gives many images for the imagination to play with. the repeat of on the deepest magic ledges of my mind's eye. while central to the poem I find it dosen't flow as well of the rest. but maybe thats just me. Thanks for letting me read and comment on your poem.	2004-11-09 10:46:13
Duet	Mark Andrew Hislop	I really liked reading this one, lots of metaphors and visuals to engage the imagination. Thats something I always enjoy . Well done!	2004-11-03 11:27:04
Marriage	Caitlin T Moreno	This poem gives a good overview of a relationship in its many stages. The line: you put life in my body to create a merger twice was one that really stuck with me well. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-26 11:24:48
God's Kinder Garden (first poem)	Andrea M. Taylor	This is a very simple yet heart felt poem, sometimes simplier lines can give the most immediate view of the soul. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-26 11:20:24
Shadow on the Wind	Jana Buck Hanks	Those gone who we yet feel still in some way we know real belonging and longing too a depth of feeling for those certain few Just felt the need to string a few lines together from what I felt on reading your poem.	2004-10-22 23:10:46
Raw Remains	Nancy Ann Hemsworth	This reminds me I'm to the point where I open the frigerator and then wonder what I was even looking for and if some one interupts me mid sentence.............................................I have trouble knowing what I was talking about. And although I'm lucky enough to still have my mother alive I'm reminded more of my grand mother. She had a hearing aid and her boy friend did too. They would be having two different arguements while thinking they were having the same coversation. At least I don't think I do that yet. Thanks for letting me read and reminisce.	2004-10-22 20:27:13
Tree haiku #2	Joanne M Uppendahl	trees pregnantly wait a patient dilating wind blows delivery oh well thats another quick take from me, always tough resisting haikuing a haiku Thanks for letting me read and play.	2004-10-22 19:19:57
Silence	marilyn terwilleger	This seems to me simpler then the ones you write now and yet like now it is emotional, so I would say you've gotten more complex and interesting but still you have your own voice. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-22 19:11:24
Squaw (revised and lenghtened)	timothy joseph canezaro	This is definitely a powerful poem full of great images, it lets the brain just take off with some suggested at themes as well as having a center theme as well, and the thought of seducing death provokes me into imaginative fancy, thanks for the good read.	2004-10-22 18:28:14
The Door	marilyn terwilleger	Every line pulls out an image from my mind, Pictures of sadness to be sure but clear, concise, pictures strick me. And to bring out emotion and spark the imagination is a very poetic thing, at least I think so.	2004-10-22 15:30:10
A Beam of Life	Debbie Spicer	Sparkle my eyes with twinkling enamel baring teeth with naked emotion strip away the brutish angry mammal to reveal sweetness and devotion	2004-10-22 13:53:30
FORBIDDEN AFFECTION	Debbie Spicer	I found this poem very compelling and holding up to reeated reading which is something I always like in a poem, sometimes the after a couple of readings a poem or anything experienced just isn't the same but other times like in your poem here it opens up to reveal more.Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-22 10:47:21
The Dawn of a New Thought	Amour Stakwi'a Dresbach	Love in ideas or ideas in love? Thats what stricks my mind in this poem and I am not sure which side of this question I come down on from this. but perhaps that is the point of it all. I hope so, Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-22 10:05:45
Willwind	Regis L Chapman	Plant your feet firmly into the world of ideas and grow to be a mindful seeker of truth.	2004-10-22 09:54:30
Digital Poetry	Rick Barnes	If its digital poetry wouldn't it be in binary, or perhaps hexidecimal (that used to be what I used to incode with on my old comodore 64 back in the early 80's. But I assume thats not what is intended here by digital poetry, then again could come up with a poem about fingers after all their digital such as: read me in braille with your tips that don't fail go slow with a rub let nothing be snubbed press your life lines against let your palms get incensed oh well, thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-22 08:44:06
Leaves	Debbie Spicer	Leaves turn in the yard windmills of fire raining percipitates joy THats my take on leaves , of course I'm not yet contemplating the raking as you have, Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-21 08:38:20
Night Pacing	Mandie J Overocker	This poem reads franticly which I'm sure is the point, it keeps the on edge feeling throughout - in my head I get a ba-boom ba-boom ba- boom sense of urgency and can feel the palms start to persire from the start- Thanks for the good read.	2004-10-15 19:07:35
Collecting the Shards	Mandie J Overocker	This poem flows real well, in the line-My hands nimble as they tremble - I keep stumbling over nimble and was wondering if - Hands dissemble as they tremble - might work better, if it dosen't betray your meaning. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-15 13:32:50
Flower haiku #1	Joanne M Uppendahl	Very colorful haiku I picture in my head leaves with knives taking little patches out of the sky, I"m glad they came back to patch it up though. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-15 13:23:48
Tree haiku #3	Joanne M Uppendahl	Tears of the willow streak the words written under Poetic Critique?	2004-10-15 13:20:46
SEASON’S CONSEQUENT	Debbie Spicer	I certainly would never underestimate the therapeutic power of writing poetry, its the laying on of hands ineffable that frees our voice. Thanks for letting me read and give a little comment, July of 2001 thats when I think I was here the first time, I wonder if I critiqued it Then?	2004-10-15 11:40:30
Colombo day	Mark Andrew Hislop	The last line gave an upbeat ending to a poem that was getting me down, of course I believe that is your intent. I do wonder of the wisdom in the line - That they may dream no more. What a lovely thought- only to the extent that it seems to me that people with no mre dreams would be rather deadened, although I think your point has more to do with that they would dream no more because they wouldn't be wanting in the economic sense. Of course maybe I just missed the point completely. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-14 15:44:28
Amethystine Mists	Jana Buck Hanks	Lots of images , keeping the mind's eye very busy, which is always a good thing. It flows well through the imagination, charmingly. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-13 17:02:08
ADORATION	Debbie Spicer	The search for the possessor of the other half of our heart, Reads very well and moves the soul - Its great to merge and then reemerge as someone new- Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-12 16:45:33
Evolutionary Fractals	Robert Wyma	the replication of simple shapes grow into astounding surprises and you've captured in many images of this poem. Thanks for letting me read and comment.	2004-10-11 16:30:11
Moon Haiku #3	Joanne M Uppendahl	I'll assume the high stars are physically high and not high in the other sense, Then again a flirting moon could be intoxicating. I can see virgo pouring wine and libra is thrown off balance with tipsy scales. Thanks for letting me read and comment. No matter how inane.	2004-10-11 16:24:35
My Children - Lost But Not Forgotten	Nancy T Bindhammer	Very heart felt poem/song with a nice ending to give it a lift above the sadness, Thanks for letting me read and comment	2004-10-11 13:13:41
Incubating The Dream (Arthurian Ode Part II)	Robert Wyma	Do I have anything to add to what I said of the first, not really except that once again its a pleasure to read, I can't say I'm real objective when it comes to anything about merlin and authur. I'm always a sucker for a round table tale.	2004-10-10 17:34:40
Sighs of Autumn	marilyn terwilleger	Good images and sounds throughout this poem, I really enjoyed it, especially those groaning trees and I can see autumn shaking its fist at the grass and trees , Thanks for letting me read and comment It was a real pleasure.	2004-10-08 13:58:39
Listen, Missy!	Andrea M. Taylor	The first two lines are the sounds of paranoia, the second two of the mistakes your prone to and of course the last is how we can lose all all of this from a nasty addiction which could be extended to other drugs as well, Thanks for letting me read and comment. The poem flowed real well.	2004-10-08 11:27:02
A Child	Amour Stakwi'a Dresbach	Who can not be charmed by a poem of the little wonders who wander into our world, changing everything and challenging everything, seeing through their eyes, hearing through their ears with a perspective we cannot dream of.they are little marvels.	2004-10-05 15:48:33
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