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Displaying Critiques 1 to 32 out of 32 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by kevin Dunn | Critique Date |
| I Can't Believe | Joe Gustin | Ah yes Joe. Quite a clssic sounding piece, well put together. Beware the sirens call, how many have been drawn down into the depths. Great job really enjoyed the read as always. Cheers Kevin. | 2015-12-12 03:04:26 |
| Hummingbird | Joe Gustin | What a lucky gal this is for whom you wrote this. If she did not love you before I'll put my money on it that she dose now. Great job change nothing. Kevin. | 2015-11-20 13:40:13 |
| haiku 32 | Wanda S. Thibodeaux | Absolutely love it. nothing more to say.Kevin. | 2015-11-20 13:37:45 |
| Anchored By Old Dirty Chains | DeniMari Z. | One can feel the pain in this work. Almost painful to read as it must have been to write. I'm not sure but it sounds like the end of a relationship that keeps being held off. Wonderful piece. Kevin. | 2015-11-09 22:09:27 |
| The Color of Joy | Wanda S. Thibodeaux | What a lovely work this one is. I could see the whole sceen as I read. I do hope you won the contest with it. Kevin. | 2015-11-09 22:05:17 |
| holocaust | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | A powerful piece in deed. I can see you feel strongly about this. The repeated "You. You were, You deny, you are not" brings the reader to stop and think. Perhaps one day humanity will stop killing. Thanks for this read. Kevin. | 2015-10-08 16:25:57 |
| What Is Love | Joe Gustin | Enjoyed the read a lot. Well written poem in deed. I hope you don't mind the sugestion that, the last verse would hit the spot much more directly if it weighed up the questions asked before. such as what is life but to leave behind not just love but hope as well or something like that. Just a thought that it might seal it all off so to speak. Great write. Kevin. | 2015-10-05 08:02:48 |
| As Summer Exhales | Joe Gustin | Hi Joe. Now that is a nice classic piece of work.Just great poetry I'd say. It hit the spot this morning. Thank you for allowing me to read this today. It's one of those fall days today here and fit just nicely in. regards. Kevin. | 2015-09-28 13:32:14 |
| Nature Class | DeniMari Z. | What a wonderful wonderful piece of work. Deni you have really written a piece that hits the spot here with me. I would not alter a thing. I read it several time just to enjoy it again and again. Kevin. | 2015-09-27 16:41:27 |
| My line | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | Fantastic read. The reader is captured from the first line right through to the last. Thank you for posting this piece. Kevin | 2015-09-22 03:58:50 |
| Love Waits | Joe Gustin | What a lovely gentle piece. The reader can immagine the girl or woman in the poem. Great work. Thanks for the read. Kevin. | 2015-09-22 03:53:37 |
| We Have Moments | James C. Horak | Very good question, leaves the reader thinking. Kevin. | 2015-08-15 10:41:27 |
| When A Lonely Wind Callls | Joe Gustin | Lovely write. I did see one samll error "When a lonely winds calls" should it be "When a lonely wind calls" It is a write that takes the reader right off the bat, but it would be nice to have some ending or a twist to seal it off. Regards. Kevin. | 2015-08-15 10:39:48 |
| less well loved | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | Great al round use of words and well written. I would so much liked to have had some resolve at the end. Like who or what this poem is about. It feels like it is building up to something, then the end. Regards. Kevin, | 2015-08-15 10:34:46 |
| Don't You Know | James C. Horak | A short piece but Wow! a lovely read. I wish it had a bout 4 more verses. My favorite line "Who blends these shapes a vigilance" Who we all ask? Good as ever.Kevin. | 2015-08-08 14:44:11 |
| Assonate | James C. Horak | Ha! yes I had to look it up and I'd say that Part of the magic of your poetry is your ability to have your words assonate in the most propitious places. Short but really did the job,causing the reader to think. Nothing to comment on in the writing. Haven't been here in a few years, but good to be back. Kevin. | 2015-08-07 17:11:54 |
| When Love Leaves | Joe Gustin | Hello Joe. Ah! yes "when love leaves" in deed. The meter changes from stanza to stanza making it uneven, but it works in the read. I am a bit of a fan of those who to not stick with convention. Sort of a mix of poetry and prose. Also like the what I call soft rhyme. It just as it should stay in my mind. Loved it. Kevin. | 2015-08-07 17:02:03 |
| Listen | DeniMari Z. | Yes Deni, It has been some time sinse I was here, but I remember you writings and enjoy every one. This is no exception. I would change nothing, it is just perfect as it is written. My favorite line. "All concepts through life should be heard" Kevin Dunn. | 2015-08-07 16:55:51 |
| what is (a poet) | Mark Steven Scheffer | Ha! yes a poet be all these things and more, much more. As are you because you are indeed a poet, because you ask this question. Really entertaining write. I also love how it layed out. Thank you for the read. Kevin. | 2015-08-07 16:52:20 |
| Masters of Fate | DeniMari Z. | Hi Deni. I don't usually critique this kind of poem because I guess I just don't get them? I want to though. What i can say about this is that It definitely is not "a mess" It is clear that this was written with ease and not forced like so many of these I have read. There were a few poets if you could even call them that, who hung around here for a while. Who's writings like this were obviously either plagiarized or just words copied from a dictionary. Your sounds original and so nice to just read over. Thanks. kevin. | 2010-12-09 23:22:25 |
| Oh Shakespeare | cheyenne smyth | Just my kind of poem. Utterly beautiful in every way. Not being a fan at all of modern poetry any more than I am of modern art, I can say best seen here in along time. Thanks. Kevin. | 2010-12-08 21:20:56 |
| Escape | Mandie J Overocker | Hi mandie I am not going to do a dry old critique. I just want to say by-golly! It is a good job you post here or there would be nothing at all. Critique.....I love rhyme, any rhyme, so I love it. Seriously rhyme for me can be kind of intoxicating or something. I really think all poetry should have it or not be allowed to be called poetry. I call anything else "common writing". Regards. Kevin. | 2010-11-10 02:33:16 |
| Time | Mandie J Overocker | Hello Mandie. I am not going to spend a lot of time doing a critique on this as it seem you obviously only posted/wrote it to touch on the time change. I was once told, take it as you will "Don't abandon an idea to soon" I believe unless you did not care, that you can do a much better job of this idea. liked it anyway, its fun. Kevin | 2010-11-08 23:14:24 |
| Mortal Soul | cheyenne smyth | I am definitely going to need some explanation of this one for sure. I am absolutely sure you know exactly what you mean. I like how you placed the words one upon the other so I also need to know what was in your head when you wrote them. Can it just simply be about death and rebirth? I am really not normally a fan of common writing I prefer what I call more traditional poetry. Liked it enough to write this though. Thanks. Kevin. | 2010-11-08 23:07:14 |
| My October Votes | Duane J Jackson | Do you mind if I ask why you post your votes? Does everyone do this now at some time in the Month? I have not been around TPL for a few years. Good stuff though eh! Regards. | 2010-11-08 22:57:56 |
| It must be time to write a poem | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hmm..Sounds like a kind of a thinking mans country song ;o) Add three guitar chords and whining cowboy and you got a hit man. OK Seriously. This poem seems to be about modern life and what is really happening in the western world today. Personal loss, no rent money, etc. Poets and minstrels have been carrying news about what is happening in the world this way for so long. I do like the way it begins in ruins and kind of spirals upward. Until it makes the reader feel better but not to the Phoenix level. I think you have set a high standard for the month. Thanks Kevin | 2010-11-06 17:08:31 |
| Midnight Lace | Lora Silvey | All those who are not frightened in to falling in love with this writer must be made if stone. I could see this a s song on an album by Jan Arden or someone. Do you put your stuff to music. No nits to pick some stuff is just as I like it. I was going to suggest a few things until I read it a few more times, no changes. Very entertaining. Thanks. Kevin. | 2010-11-04 00:19:02 |
| Solace in Season | Mandie J Overocker | Hello Mandie. First I must say I like it a lot . I read a poem first just thinking of how it entertains me Then I ask myself do I understand it and what exactly is the writer tying to say to me. As much as I like it I need some help with this one. I don't get too hung up on meter with other folks stuff, if I did I might trip on many a good read but it did require a little work to get it to flow off the lips. please reply and explain what you are saying to the reader. Regards. Kevin. | 2010-11-04 00:12:52 |
| The twins | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hello Mark. I love it but what is it about. At first i thought it was about a Mother and her children, then about outer space. I love the way you use words but I need to know what you mean. I don't really get the meter, each verse seems different. Thanks for this Kevin. | 2010-11-03 23:59:02 |
| Infra | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hello Mark. This is the kind of writing I like to read over and over. Seems like 5 little separate poems that can be enjoyed together or in any order.Or used as epitaphs on grave stones There is a lot of this around but most not as good as this. I for one would like you to explain it's meaning in detail to me so I can enjoy it some more. Kevin, | 2010-10-31 02:48:06 |
| Abandoned | James C. Horak | I was once told that "Art is never finished, only abandoned" Do I get the impression that this was "abandoned" a bit too soon? I guess I am showing my ignorance when I ask, what the hell is this collection of words all about? | 2010-10-29 22:59:37 |
| Skid Marks | DeniMari Z. | By Golly, I thought this was going to be a poem about a pair of shorts. I thought to myself.....Hmmm, this'll be a good'n. | 2010-10-29 22:51:45 |
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