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Displaying Critiques 101 to 150 out of 953 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Lora Silvey | Critique Date |
| Puppet | cheyenne smyth | Unusual, captive of emotion, of love, of ones own heart--a feel of trying to pull away--waanting to be free yet mesmerized by the strings that tether the heart and so if in servitude solace could be found within the dance of the mind it would be bearable just to hold tender the love--such mixed emotions so very well portrayed. An enjoyable read, easy flow speaking volumns with so few words. Nicely done. Lora | 2011-12-15 03:17:25 |
| The Tea Trade | Mark Andrew Hislop | Hello Mark, Quite a different type of write this is one--most enjoyable. Your metaphors are excellent and are full of promise and nuiance--all that lovers should have and look forward to. The joys shared, the game of discovery and all the delicious delights you lay out for us in this wonderful banquet of words that are placed ever so carefully. No ambiguiosity with this one. Excellent alliteration and rhyme... a truly fresh take on love and romance. Thank you for honoring us with this new style from your accomplished pen. Lora | 2011-12-15 03:12:23 |
| Owls and Ravens | cheyenne smyth | Oh so lovely dark and mysterious almost sinister but not quite--just on the edge. Your flow is so smooth that it easily captivates your reader with the gentle rush of those forboding and lonely word choices. Excellent, in emotion that gives way to confusions pain, broken hearted reverie. Can not pick a favored line for they all blend so well an no one line triumphs over the other. Most enjoyable, no nits or spags. Lora | 2011-08-10 23:24:41 |
| twisted | charles r pitts | Perhaps a bit too truthful but excellently written. I especially liked the turn as so often people do not truly voice what comes to thought. The thought, too me screams for everyone to quit sugar coating everything in life. Life is real, often harsh and not pleasing to the eye...fantasy or realism; either way this was excellently constructed with good balance, an easy flow that led the reader right to the point of impact without a hitch. On my list, Lora | 2011-08-01 18:11:16 |
| His Echo | cheyenne smyth | Very original from the chose of verbiage to the subject matter. Loved the word choses and the phrases coined from them. The intensity of this is not lost on the reader as it builds to the unexpected conclusion. Bravo poetess for a new a fresh way of viewing relationships... Lora | 2011-07-29 14:57:04 |
| Ink | cheyenne smyth | I really like this somewhat dark and forboding poem. It brought to mind the travails of Poe and yes--these late night terrors would give ones quill much to record however you've done this is a most pleasant form with the use of perfectly chosen verbiage to create the perfect images. Well done, most enjoyable. Lora | 2011-07-29 14:51:38 |
| FREEDOM | Mandie J Overocker | Bravo, what a wonderful accrostic, short, simple, succinct and what an impact your words have. Very well said and in such a delicious way. Bravo again! Lora (I think I'm going to steal your lines and use them as my motto) | 2011-06-30 10:23:16 |
| A Dream Of You | DeniMari Z. | Clean, simple--home spun type poem that has that sparkle of someone sitting on cloud nine. The love and happiness that exudes from your well placed words is contagious, this so uplifting. Even though a few places your lines sound a bit contrived this poem is so fresh and unincumbered that is truly a pleasure to read. Lora | 2011-06-30 10:15:51 |
| Dearest Summer | cheyenne smyth | Such a delicious personification poem of summer. Yes, she comes alive and you present us with all the lush tastes and feels of the glorious colors that summer brings. A very pleasant and uplifting read done with perfect meter that takes your reader gently through your passages. Lora | 2011-06-24 17:55:26 |
| Ruffles | cheyenne smyth | Wow, what a little tart this faux sonnet is...Excellent job with your iambics, rhymes etc... If one didn't look too close they'd assume this to be a sonnet though we know it isn't--the repeating line and the couplet rhyme are a give-away... You express so well the scene, excellent verbiage and wonderful image creation in this compact little poem. Bravo, poetess--roses at your feet. Lora | 2011-06-17 11:07:09 |
| Momentary Elegance | James C. Horak | Simply delectable, deliciously delightful, delicately dialing up the desireable, ooooou! Your lines flow and weave like the breath of this poem, continuous motion--sensitive, passionate and rythmic... Your words could not be clearer les they be in movie form but alas that was playing out in my mind's eye. I have read and reread this and find I return for more. The depths of your lines is woven well and at first blush many will miss the intensity, the complex emotions and all the words that are left unsaid... A pleasure to read and review. Lora | 2011-05-26 19:53:47 |
| Derelict Without an Island | James C. Horak | Oh so sweet the words that glide from your pen to color the thoughts of my mind...have we become the the unclean, the waste that needs be wiped away--hearts hardened--no taste of love or life...such thoughts you bring to ponder less we face our own truths. Have so missed your pennings and so pleased to see this here today. Bravo poet, you arrive again. Lora | 2011-04-29 15:23:28 |
| Saturant | Dellena Rovito | Nicely done Dellena, great descriptive words that paint pleasant images to mind. With your easy flow of words and smooth lines your reader not only can invision your florals but also begins to sample their fragrance. A most enjoyable read...Lora | 2011-04-27 17:49:27 |
| when it was, once upon a time | Ellen K Lewis | Ellen, honestly I like it the way it is. Sometimes--the formalities of punctuation and all clutter a piece and take away the raw emotion of it. You've given wonderful insights--most can relate to some if not all and you've done it in such a picturesque voice. I found this poignant yet uplifting, liberating yet nostalgic--what a ride you've taken your reader on--bravo. Lora | 2011-04-26 22:24:39 |
| Morning With "Christ" In Life | DeniMari Z. | Your journey proceeds on, a growing process that continues to enlighten and enfold you within its lessons. Wondrous nuiances continue to come forth from your pen--your sharing and trust in us whom you've allowed to read you work are humbled by your words and your trust. It is easy to see your growth both spiritually and in your craft as you profect your strophes. Thank you for sharing. Lora | 2011-04-26 22:20:24 |
| I'm Here, I'm Here | cheyenne smyth | Awe, such a serene and enjoyable view you offer us Cheyenne in that incomparble way that only your accomplished strophe can. There is nothing here to find fault with, impeccable as always and a true gem--a most enjoyable read, good luck with the contest. Lora | 2011-04-26 22:14:49 |
| Pretty Things | James C. Horak | James, so nice to see one of your poems and such a delightful poem. Full of romance and the wonders of the heart coupled with and easy smooth flow this poem gives the reader that wistful "perhaps" feeling. The gentle rhymes and alliterations make this a pleasure to read. One small suggestion: L10= drop the word "and" to the next line thus giving your enjambment a better kick...just MHO. I luxuriated in your choice of words and felt the pleasure of having this treasure of true poetry--to read. Happy Valentines to you also. Lora | 2011-02-16 08:30:59 |
| Life Tree A Challenge To Be | DeniMari Z. | Yes, if the roots are weak they can still grow if allowed to but only if left to gather strength less they be tampered with and then all will come crumbling down. Your short brief poem gives good insight to the fraility of the human condition, great word choices. Lora | 2011-02-08 19:28:44 |
| Patch Her Soul | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, what an ominous and dark poem you've penned for us this month. It speaks volumns of life--cause and effect--and to traverse on. Your word choices were perfect for this smartly penned poem. Lora | 2011-02-08 19:26:24 |
| Underneath the Mask | Mandie J Overocker | Whoa, this is definitely a heavy duty indepth look at depression, and in such a nice poetic form you've detailed it right down to the very last fact, and yes--the mask that is hidden behind until--. Excellent choice of words and a good flow made for a smooth read with this well penned write. Lora | 2011-02-08 19:24:14 |
| Snow Grains Will Change | DeniMari Z. | Deni, very nicely done. Your depiction of winter is wonderful, great discriptions that paint the images of the mind. The cadence of your poem is smooth making for an easy read and your wordsmithing is fresh bringing life to your poem, one of your best. Lora | 2011-02-06 21:46:28 |
| Here - After | Mary J Coffman | Mary it is so very good to see you, you are missed. Your poem is so delicate yet in its mournfull cry there is such love, such compassion and then the yearning, the spirit craving its own...wonderful and I'll ride those clouds with you, share my rainbows and stars also. This reaches inside the reader and becomes one with the reader leaving a sense--no a feeling that has no name or description beyond what you've given in your words. Many blessings to you, I can make no suggestion for change for perfection needs none. Lora | 2011-01-28 18:35:10 |
| Old Bones | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, Very well done. On first blush this seem simple and staight forward, the speaking of the earth and what she has suffered however, upon read and re-read one gathers so much more meaning and in different directions. An old woman who carries on--sees all that has gone before whether personal struggles or that of close ones and yet in her croning she persevers--gaining knowledge and wisdom. I really enjoyed this one and liked the duality of your accomplished pen. Lora | 2011-01-28 11:33:29 |
| Waves | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, This is such a deep and thoughtful piece, so eloquently written with excellent verbiage and word smithing that only come from an accomplished pen. Upon first blush it is soft and has that "calgon take me away" affect however on closer inspection it is so much more. You show the connectiness of all life and how in owning that each componet recognises and respects the other. Kudos, superb. Lora | 2011-01-27 09:40:42 |
| Fairytale Hell | DeniMari Z. | Deni, such an unusual poem that probably speaks volumns for so many of us. Your words are well chosen and your descriptive usuage paints the images in your easy flowing poem. One small suggestion if I might; in the second stanza: Mystery as a child fears creeps under the bed at night lies awake with fear and fright move your last line to be your second and possibly change "lies" to "lying"--this would put clarification to who or what is in fear and fright... A most enjoyable read that does leave something to ponder. Good luck with the contest this month... Blessings, Lora | 2011-01-27 09:35:09 |
| I Lied | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | Medard, What a deliciously nice write you've given us and what high praise an honor you've afforded all who come here to read, share and be heard. Your words will resonate with us all as we hope that we will see more of you. Nicely stated with style and class--Bravo! Lora | 2011-01-27 09:29:06 |
| MOON GODDESS | David Keesey | David, I like the feel of this, the essence that you speak about and the mystical truths. I see that you are using punctuation rules that usually apply to prose-- A little less punctuation, using line breaks to make your statements stand out in this free verse poem would be a plus and definitely make this a poem that stands out raising it to a higher level. A most enjoyable poem, one that deserves to be read over and over. Lora | 2011-01-27 09:26:22 |
| Seasoned | Dellena Rovito | Dellena, this is excellent, so very sage with a certain zen quality. In so few words you've professed such a simple wisdom that appears to ellude many. You've keyed upon one of the most essential senses that we have and how it affects us in so many ways. Your lines and gentle cadence are smooth offering an easy read within a nice flow. Your verbiage choices are perfect--you waste no words and use only what is necessary to make your point. There is nothing I would suggest to change about this poem, it is one that resonates. Lora | 2011-01-27 09:11:58 |
| Bathing Anew | DeniMari Z. | Deni, I can see where you are going with this...yes--things change, perceptions change as do priorities and values. That looking back and the ephimany that comes with isn't always an ah-ha moment but it can still reward the viewer with valuable insight. Just a few little bits to niggle at here:
"Then a thought of how when | 2011-01-09 06:08:01 |
| The Forest | cheyenne smyth | Simply a delectible poem, your imabics are spot on giving this that lilt that dances the reader through your lines with ease. The gentle rhyme makes for a soft and gentle read making this a pleasure to read. Bravo poetess this is an excellent work. Lora | 2011-01-09 05:48:03 |
| Last Poem of An Unwitting Liar | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | Medard, what a deep and somewhat dark poem, and then possibly you echo the thoughts that so many have as they age and know that time can be so very short. I remember Arnie's questions in his last months; your poem reminded me of those questions--I also miss him, he was a dear friend. I could always count on Arnie to point me in the right direction, to make me think and even question my own thoughts*smile*. Your poem is well thought out, presented and moves the reader through you lines with ease, I think your closing lines are the perfect way to surmise the thoughts you've explored. Best always, Lora | 2010-12-15 04:21:11 |
| A Child of Gold | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, this is a wonderful poem especially fit for the season. I'm so delight to read and review your delicious poem. Your verbiage is rich in textures as your well rhymed meter carries the reader through your verse. I can not give you one line I like best for surely the others would weep with envy. Simply perfection, my dear. Lora | 2010-12-15 00:44:28 |
| Masters of Fate | DeniMari Z. | Deni, I found this a engrossing read and was hooked on your poem down to the "We played and gave" starts. For me--from that point forward it broke ranks with the rest of your write and almost took on a preachy tone which didn't fit the tone of the rest of the poem. I know that is probably clear as mud...and, of course it is just MHO, however you may want to rework the last part a bit. Very dynamic start with a very zen message. Your beginning grabs the reader right off. Lora | 2010-12-11 17:00:57 |
| Broken Pallet | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne I have seen many who would throw barbs at other poets in essence to make themselves look as though they were a much better poet by making others lesser than their equal. Pure jealousy or meanness of spirit--it is hard to tell. And, then after such a bout seen that their work is weak and without luster leaving no response from a would be audience...so sad. You've amptly discribed the breaking of maybe an other wise astute an articulate poet, your tightly clean written verse is exemplary in telling this story...Bravo. Lora | 2010-12-11 16:54:54 |
| Oh Shakespeare | cheyenne smyth | This is quite a unique and wonderful sonnet. Your metered count is spot on as are your rhymes. The verbiage you use is well chosen for your subject. The lilting flow of the romantic plea is simply delicious and the wording couldn't be better--an earnest plea to the master to be your muse if only for just a moment to write a romantic poem. Most enjoyable. Lora | 2010-12-11 16:49:03 |
| REUNITED | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, this is a heartfelt write filled with much emotion. You have a good rhyme scheme and area always careful that your rhymes do not come across as forced. The meter you've use gives this a gentle lilt that might not be noticed for the plaintive voice of this poem...however it is definitely there in its dance down the page. I would add my voice to yours if I could, you echo many of the voices of those who feel as you do. Excellent...Lora | 2010-12-01 19:11:00 |
| Honestly Speaking | Mandie J Overocker | Mandy, Your rhymes are spot on, non feel forced and the meter is excellent lending a smooth flow to your words carrying your reader easily down the page. Your choice of words are most fitting for your subject matter and I think they speak with honesty and clarity. Your closing stanza definitely rings true of so many situations. Very good, a pleasureable read. no nits or suggestions. Lora | 2010-12-01 19:06:11 |
| Our Story | Mandie J Overocker | A pleasing easy to read poem done in couplets with good rhyme that does not seem at all forced was a pleasure to read. You've said so much in so few words--taken from the start to the end-like a journal. Very nicely done, no nits or spags. Lora | 2010-11-28 03:30:57 |
| Monarchs Are Worth Saving | Mark D. Kilburn | Mark what a very courageous and ambitious undertaking. First, let me say--I read with much interest even when your poem morphed to prose--so interesting. You could have staged this is seperate parts, three poems would have accomplished your story without dragging or loosing the reader's interest. IMHO at: "His splendid strength supports me, he loves me, completely..." is where I would have ended my first poem and then devided the remainder up into sequels. Anyway, I did enjoy reading about the glorious monarch. Thanks for the wonderful knowledge. Lora | 2010-11-28 03:28:10 |
| The Sea Speaks | cheyenne smyth | Another poem from your accomplished pen that dances across the page as if we are rolling with the sea and its waves. The lilt and meter makes for an exceptional read while your rhyme pattern remains spot on. Kudos my friend for such an exquisite poem of life and passion. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:32:43 |
| Shattered Orange | cheyenne smyth | Such a deeply sad and heartfelt poem written with such skill from your accomplished pen. Your flow is smooth and your rhymes lend a certain lilt to your count, an enjoyable meter. Your word choices definitely add a nice flavor to this even in its sadness, your closing line does show a chance for redemption--hope. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:25:48 |
| My October Votes | Duane J Jackson | Duane, I think you made excellent choices although I don't believe anyone is posting their votes anymore and it would probably be better to post it on the forum. Thanks for sharing. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:22:16 |
| Thankful Days Walk | DeniMari Z. | Yes, Deni, I wish you the best for the holiday seasons. Your poem reminds gently that we need to be thankful for all things, each season has its own gifts just as each day does. Your poem flows easily down the page like a leaf floating to ground. Hope all is better with you. Nice write. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:12:45 |
| Waiting | Mandie J Overocker | A very strong poem Mandie. Your repetition of "waiting" makes a very strong impact. The overall tone of your poem brings images of war to the mind, of women, children, elder people and soldiers all dying--for what? It raises anger, and a want to lash out at the injustices that war brings--so many caught up in the whims of the keeper of the keys... OK, off my soap box...a very compelling poem written exceptionally well with an excellent choice of verbiage that conveys your message quite well. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:08:57 |
| What I Can't Tell You | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, what an ambitious and somber write. Your occaisional rhyme and easy flow made for a well flowing read though the subject is quite hard to digest, we all want to close our eyes and pretend it doesn't exist but it does. Even those very young envolved try to block it, but those that know and don't speak are the most dispicable--the ones that sit on the sideline to rake in dollars...and what of the little souls that are lost? Excellent, keep speaking out. Lora | 2010-11-28 01:00:58 |
| Dancing Days | Dellena Rovito | Dellena, How nice to be greeted by one of your wonderful poems. I really liked this one. Your word choices are delightful while your flow is smooth allowing for a pleasureable read. You create a feeling of zen, deep and contemplative and so sage. Your words ring true and in the fini', things are never as they have percieved. This is phenomenal, roses at your feet and kudos my friend. Wadoh, Lora | 2010-11-20 18:12:08 |
| It must be time to write a poem | Mark Andrew Hislop | Mark, This is truly delicious and if you must--perhaps this review may be construed strictly as fluff. However, your pen has put a smile upon my face with your smooth flowing meter that dances this reader through your lines. As you turn a phrase and with each delightful strophe--your muse can be seen giggling as she stands there guiding marks. Brilliant and most enjoyable...Lora | 2010-11-10 18:02:18 |
| Pachyderms & Jackasses | Mark D. Kilburn | Hello Mark, It has been awhile since we've seen something from your pen, nice to see you. This is quite an ambitious write. While loaded with tons of metaphors, heightened language, I must say that I wouldn't classify this as a poem but a wonderful piece of poetic prose. Even in that context, you've made some very astute observations that to my way of thinking are spot on. This thesis prompts one to wonder if things will ever change; is it to be the eternal struggle between those who have and want more and those who have not? Yes, perhaps it does come down to absolute power corupts absolutely although, you've said in a much fancier way. You've given this reader much to ponder with your finely honed pen. Lora | 2010-11-10 17:57:37 |
| Escape | Mandie J Overocker | I enjoyed this little poem Mandie, and I must say that I want to go with you. If you find this place of which you speak let us know--I'm sure there are a few of us that could use the respite. While your meter did halt a bit in a few places it did not hinder this reader from enjoying the pictures you've painted with your well chosen words and gentle rhyme. Lora | 2010-11-10 17:50:51 |
| Gravestones | cheyenne smyth | Oh shoot, just rip our hearts out and feed them to us...and no it won't be the last tear. Very powerful, woeful and humbling as we all will eventually pass by this way and leave someone behind. Your choice of words brings deep meaning and color to this easy moving poem. A fine FV whose line breaks work well leaving no need for punctuation. This poem weighs heavy on the heart as it must with all who have passionate emotions within. A most enjoyable read, no nits or spags. Lora | 2010-11-10 17:32:38 |
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