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Poem Title	Poet Name	Critique Given by Dellena Rovito	Critique Date
Skid Marks	DeniMari Z.	Deni, Cute! You brought me a chuckle, your old bones indeed. Dellena	2010-11-06 14:59:20
Passing Through	DeniMari Z.	Deni, I believe there is a God. Not of the earth made up stories God. But a force of goodness that we are apart of. That returns to him. One thing for sure we aren't as they tell us. View Zeitgeitz the movi and keep your mind open. [movie on line] And no I don't believe any kind of garbage, but research and see. I'm reading secret societies of the world right now. wow Chariots of the gods/gods of eden a couple other interesting. Keep searching/thinking/asking till you know! dellena	2010-10-29 16:59:06
Midnight Lace	Lora Silvey	Lora, Sounds a bit forlorn and sad and empty and yes you are mad! As am I. How one can wish for loving truly felt and expressed affection. As we become older and more imperfect we feel love is out of our touch. Not really, but yes. We know the differences and won't settle for nothing. [anymore] I have never experienced the perfect soul mate and am tired of looking. Your poem sings to the soul of every women. Usually not the men, they don't know what were talking of. Great job Dellena	2010-10-29 16:42:18
Abandoned	James C. Horak	James, Sounds like life is petty serious! I know at times things appear desolate and too much to bear. I feel also that way and try hard to get by it any way possible. I'm so overworked at this time, I could patience [ha!] my hold momentarily. There seems soooooo much to bear. If the rain were clean on my face, it could be gentle, but it's not! What to hold sacred? You got me going again my friend..... d	2010-10-29 16:34:25
This Mask	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, Love it and so true for a lot of us. The pity is when you don't realize it nor why! And it takes time of inward pondering to get it right. I liked the ending rhyme it went out with a bang. You've your own sweet halloween mask. DELLENA	2010-10-29 16:26:39
The Storm	Lora Silvey	Lora, I was with you on the walk. I saw the colorful wonderful Mother Earth through your eyes. Skies and field are what we are. Hard going but still keeping on. Even as lightening strikes. Rutted the road from life's travels but what is the recourse? Great imagery......wonderful descriptions. Dellena	2010-09-25 17:50:56
Becoming One	Mandie J Overocker	Hi, We are many faceted as everything else in life really seems to be as well. Although you dwell more on growth and difficulty. Ending with a united/whole spirit. I like the ideas of this piece... although it could be a bit more concise. I like the short stanzas leading to easy flowing of words and thought. Rhymes a bit expected. A good job. Dellena	2010-09-23 17:12:04
Night in Summer's Soul	DeniMari Z.	Deni, Gazing heavenward on a warm summer's night, evaluating the day. Pins of pearls is wonderful wording.... Enjoyed the moment with you. Dellena	2010-09-06 17:31:36
Her Garland Grows	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, We have had a cold summer so much for freedom from the cold! [Northwest] Your words are lovely of course. Feminine, fluffy and sweet. If all our days could live up to that potential. How great it would be. Enjoyed this. Dellena	2010-09-06 17:17:43
DRAGON SLAYER MEETS THE PREACHER MAN	Michael Bird	Michael, It is the God preaching men you have to watch. Always ones you wouldn't expect [Godly-holy] let you down. So easy to ay, not so easy to do. They are all talk! I like your anger showing in capital letters. Dellena	2010-09-06 15:48:58
Intact	James C. Horak	James, Glad to see you are intact! Your poem is good. I think everything 'is' because of it's intent. we rarely if ever ask or think of the intent or purpose of another's actions. We would thus find the root and be able to kill it. Of course that would ruin everything, right? Good job. Dellena	2010-08-02 16:17:06
Good To Stop In!	Ellen K Lewis	Ellen, And good day to you. Your poem shows the closeness of humanity. We all love and enjoy friendship and company of others. We feel soooooooo alone at times it helps so much when someone cares. Today I needed to read your words. Dellena	2010-08-02 16:04:41
Love To The Last Night	DeniMari Z.	DeniMari, I like this. It can fill many thoughtful places. it is one to ponder. my favorite stanza... Cords ply and pull in deaf days of hate midst the "Holy" chase behind ahead to something great Although they all ring good. I'm very impressed Dellena	2010-08-02 15:57:12
Cry For Me	Lora Silvey	Lora, This is sad but true. Our poor Mother Earth. Your words strike the core of me and I could weep. Of all your works this fills me best. It feels it came straight from your soul. The best in my eyes. I would like to have written this. I would hunt my soul for a better [best] title. Wadoh Yours in spirit Dellena	2010-08-02 15:52:12
The Bucket	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, I like the soothing sing song rhythm. Although a few spots caught me... The thought of aging works well with the old aged home and it's bucket. It needs a bit of word adjustment/below, I think, but I enjoy this a lot. Bucket holes spill the drubbing rain Hopes to hold the drops pass in vain......This line plugged me up somehow? count is right? I can’t visit this doleful place again, it hurts my heart to see its face.....the 'again' messed up the count and rhythm. Dellena	2010-08-02 15:42:52
LIGHTHOUSE	Monica ONeill	Monica, This could be a tree also. [I like sequoias] Like a vigilante guarding the world. Even like people awaiting, handling their fate. Something to ponder at reevaluation time. The short sentenced stanzas made easy follow along reading of this unpretentious piece. dellena	2010-07-29 15:47:34
THE MUSICIAN	Monica ONeill	Monica, Hi, nice to see you at the ol' link again. This poem like the violin reminds me of the most holy sounds of crystal tinkling from the wind. It reaches into the core lifting you into the highest high of Goodness. [All that we are] I love the sound, I need the sound, we are all the sound. Thanks for the thoughts. Dellena	2010-07-20 16:58:50
Smothered Fears	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, Very nice. A neat way of soothing ones self from things you cannot change. Fixed is the past. Rarely do we have choices. And easily we take the path of least resistance. I'd change a few things past if I could. You wrote a thinking poem..... I like living the memories. Your rhythm is perfect. I'd like: Casting memories in the sea flowing between her soul and heart rather than mem'ries Great job, a lot to chew on. Dellena	2010-07-05 15:53:22
"Uniforms" Should Be Worn With Pride	DeniMari Z.	Deni, I want to say some things not very poetic. First of all, all our warring is not to protect and serve the people. It's is basically for [evil usually] government agendas that is unknown by the young idealistic man/soldier. [when he signs up] They are asked then to kill! Along with other evil inhuman acts asked of them! Is it any wonder coming back from this they are almost soulless. They my dear have been "had". My heart bleeds for our poor used emotionally up servicemen. What they thought was heroic/yes, but manipulated madness was laid on them to carry the rest of their days. The secret twist is hidden from most everyone as we wave our flag of peace. American government doesn't care or want peace! It's a mind f...! They want power and money.....that's it. Research my dear! I'm done hope you don't mind my point of view. I could go on but I've said enough! Your poem did bring out emotion and fervor. Dellena	2010-06-20 16:39:12
Lucidity	Lora Silvey	Lora, I am confused with the word fluted? Fluted goblets, grooved sand? I experience a sort of melancholy moments of remembering and evaluating one's life and blowing a kiss to the wind; all very emotional. But I would be more comfortable and more enjoyable if fluted fit in easier. Hope I make sense? Dellena	2010-06-20 16:19:48
Rejection	cheyenne smyth	cheyenne, The wound thing through me off track the first stanza. I think coiled or folded etc. would have worked and not set me back figuring it out. It's like reading loveliness and getting stopped short and how difficult to recapture the mood. Drat it was so nice. Dellena	2010-06-20 15:46:16
Sailing Free	cheyenne smyth	cheyenne, Sounds like Jonathan Livingston Seagull. letting the bird fly free. Hoping he'll come back. I think everyone should fly free actually. I'm tickled he came back to you. Most tales don't end as well. I think your refrain come back to me, works well keeping the poem tight yet relaxed. I enjoyed the water aspect and think you did a fine job. Dellena	2010-06-20 15:18:04
Between	Thomas H. Smihula	Thomas, I feel both going up or coming down, what really does it matter on the journey? Everything of the unknown can beat you with fear. But onc you take that fear and eat it and consume it, it's part of who we are. High low/up down. I say ride that stallion to the finish and get on with winning the race. A winner is the one that continually works at conquering fear. Each of us in our own private way. Ride hard my good man. Dellena	2010-06-01 17:49:14
I Blew a Kiss	Joe P. OGrady	Joe, Yearning, longing for the love gone. It is unrequited love in your poem. Sad and yet joyful. Poignant! I felt the emotion in every word. And the ending was lovely. Everyone wishes someone felt that way toward them. A wonderful read... Dellena	2010-06-01 17:05:37
The Wounded Sea	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, I'm soooo with you. My gut is wrenched to know of the horror from the spill! They could have capped it/plugged it up by dynamiting around it, from the start. The government powers that be, have nasty ways to eliminate people. Starvation for one, poisoning another. I can't bear the pain of it all for our wild life. I'm so ashamed to be a human cause of it all. Your poem makes me weep. Dellena	2010-05-25 17:32:30
Free Your Mind	DeniMari Z.	Deni, Interesting take on eliminating stress, living pleasure. You scattered your problems out to the universe. Letting it 'go'. If this works you should bottle it. Earth needs so much help. The sea life suffering is so difficult. Good job, Dellena	2010-05-25 17:26:20
Alive	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, Lovely lovely.... Your expressions original/creative/memorable. calloused road/the skin of night/bleached sheets You are alive and thriving! Your poetry is most always divine. Dellena	2010-05-19 16:33:54
All the angry women	Moira Grace Hamel-Smith	Moire, Sounds like you've been silent too long. Being true to ourselves wasn't taught as much to girls! But once you open the gates all breaks loose. Hold on. friends and lovers made less when we choose I think chose would read better! and they instead of we.. Good job. Dellena	2010-05-19 16:21:13
Witnessing the Sea	Kenneth R. Patton	Kenneth, Sounds like reincarnation or having a bad dream. Interesting concept. This is easy to read and flows along well. I think you could have framed the story more mysteriously. And left it open to wondering. Instead of summing it up at the end. I think you have a lot of meat with this poem to do just about anything with it. Dellena	2010-05-19 16:15:55
Dusk	Joe P. OGrady	Joe, I like rhyming but sometimes hiding the rhyme [internal] is fun. Try that, it is less contrived. Your subject matter is very sensual. I'll have a cigarette later! Good job. Dellena	2010-05-19 15:58:35
La Famiglia	Lora Silvey	Lora, I'm half Italian. Mama Mia! My crazy southern family. I like your poem it flows well. It sounds like someone close was Italian [secret love]. They all seem to go and one is left alone. The Italians are pretty emotional,good or bad. They live fuly with robust. I'm personally not robusting as I should! Ciao, Dellena	2010-05-04 16:14:26
Lost Miracles	Mark D. Kilburn	Mark, I love your poem of the plant life. If we used them instead of American chemically made medicine we would be healthier, possibly well! It angers me at the way our standards have left and money profits all that matters. people die with poisoning from that endeavor. Your poem is life enhancing which is 'good'! You have written it well using personification. Your internal and external rhymes were perfecto. Lost/harvest/possesed, fighting/life I'm into medicine men also. Loved this, Dellena	2010-05-02 18:41:51
Thief	Lora Silvey	Lora, The 'jerk' whomever he is or was. [some] Men are enough to drive a women to be an old maid. Smooth talker night stalker! Can't live with or without them. Pitiful fo both. Good job, no unnecessary talk. Straight p. Dellena	2010-04-30 17:37:30
A Cottage	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, A wistful interlope into times past. Sitting doing needlepoint or embroidery. Not done so much any more. I use to do knitting, crochet etc. Gratifying, simple and fun. Today fun is a lot different. I feel the need for a cup of hot tea and a warm fire. Join me? Nice pleasant poem. Dellena	2010-04-30 17:28:36
Hidden Tethers	Lora Silvey	Lora, Nice poem for mothers. I especially like calendar mark invading the day. I hate a date telling when to show appreciation! Can't fight city hall on that one. Hope your mother is still alive, for your benefit. Mine died when I was 20. Never knew her actually. Happy mothers day Lora. Wado, Dellena	2010-04-26 15:59:21
Magic Song	Joe P. OGrady	Joe, This sings like a song......sweet, full to the brim with an innocent type of loving. Pure hopeful bliss. Your meter s good, rhythm nice. Title describes the poem but could be better. The power of alchemy, Bewitched.......something defining magic. Just a thought. You write a good poem! Dellena	2010-04-19 19:53:30
Enter Out	James C. Horak	James, I think there must be a beginning and also an end. My brain can fathom no less. man bent with time wants The rest bent in mind to be no better [let's me ponder!] Secrets to be torn inside out, worlds alike in living death to propel a lie Thought to manifest with horror. Sounds like whats going on now. Manifesting horror. Interesting write. Dellena	2010-04-03 18:27:44
The New Math	Thomas Edward Wright	Thomas, You see, 'we' is not what we’ve been taught, Wrings very true. The start and finnish great! I like summations. The square root of ever is yesterday; Byron goes into Texas just once. There is no remainder, ever. And everything in between wonderful. Thought provoking, no useless wording. I'm impressed! Dellena	2010-04-03 18:21:44
Darkness	Michael Bird	Michael, Death is death. Same as life is life. We all gotta do it. This feels like death almost stalks us. So many are dying/more than usual it seems. And that is true. The shadow government/world bankers are aiming for depopulation. That is why one needs to be careful what you breath, eat, think and do. [seriously] take in only good! If the world's energy turns wrong all will be pure evil. Pray and work toward love. It being our main weapon. The dark feeling of this poem never let up it challenged me to answer. That's pretty powerful. Good projection of perplexity. Dellena	2010-03-31 18:26:20
Two Here	James C. Horak	James, Sounds like lovers parting. Lovely to be together but heavy with baggage. Neither willing to change. You leave this open to many interpretations. I like that type. A bit slower this month but still we are progressing. You are a winner! Good job! Dellena	2010-03-31 17:57:07
Questioning	Nancy Ann Hemsworth	Nancy, Always you must wash ashore to yourself. If we could just eat up the loved one as the black widow spider does after mating. Thus her babies are part of both of them in actuality. You have captured that love essence and show how it all plays out to aloneness. Always and eventually. Alas the sweet/sadness of love. Good job, Dellena	2010-03-27 17:32:37
All Lights Go Out	DeniMari Z.	Deni, I think the only one that truly cares to look for signs would be ourselves. We really are most interested and needful of information pertainin to us.We are together and yet soooo alone. Doe like eyes cry upwards , I dislike because it feels like weakness. And we are a lot stronger than we think. I'd like eyes of concern or insight....better. I also think we live fate daily. How did we come to be where we are in time. fate, we follow the road of fate. We control very little. All in all, thought provoking writing. Dellena	2010-03-27 17:26:40
The Virtues of a Parasite	James C. Horak	James, How disgusting [his speech], but you actually said it all. We are actually related to all of life. Our hair has dna color same as Octopus ink, our eyes see because of plants chlorophyll. The sun is in our eyes. So animals, insects etc. are our family. The bible doesn't ring true for me because it says we're to use everything on the Earth for our advantage. Which is untrue. We are all equal. The Earth belongs to all. WE are the cancer with our killing for no reason. Wars, secrets kept to heal and help the betterment of all life. Back to your poem writing, I love it's pertinence and applicable-ness. You are the best! Dellena	2010-03-19 16:06:10
Point Road Snow	Thomas Edward Wright	Thomas, This I like. I feel like pulling up to your fire and telling you of things you haven't heard. You sound like an old codger whose been there, done that.......let's chew the fat. You owe it to us youngsters to share. The clay lays cold under my feet too. Dellena	2010-03-02 18:11:10
To A Muse, Who	Thomas Edward Wright	Thomas, Some women got your dander up. I must say I used the dictionary often to figure this one out. A few things maybe to correct.. Dionysian instead of Dyonysian? Ecphractic instead of ekphrastic? I'll say no more. Dellena	2010-03-02 18:02:49
Strands	James C. Horak	James, Nice, eloquent and always something to ponder. "Will comes not from intention but to shadow reflection" how true! Independent thought throughout.... Your ending stanza had me a bit perplexed. But I finally figured it out. My brain cells are being taxed, which is good. As always a fine piece of work. This can apply to a multitude of things. poetry writing, communicating, government...... Dellena	2010-03-02 17:45:49
To Write Like Poe	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, Another great one. I love Poe's Raven and refrain throughout. This is mostly iambic prntameter, yes. It ain't easy for sure. Love the ending. When your done your done. I tried my best while penning words that pour. When he said...nothing more What more can I say but I would love more. Thank you, such talent! Dellena	2010-02-28 21:12:19
Beast Be Gone	DeniMari Z.	Deni, I can understand your anger at things that harm you and ones you love. Of course it should be gone. Good people should have good lives. That doesn't work with yin and yang. We also pay the price for evil sins against us. Your poem cuts to the chase! Enough! I say the same.....Enough! Enough war, deaths, lies and global warming. The list goes on. Someone must speak up and step out. It might as well be you......and me. Good job. dellena	2010-02-28 20:39:01
The makers	Mark Andrew Hislop	Mark, Another good poem. Taking me to places never thought. We were given life and a brain to figure the rest of it out. In many ways failing, twisting things, manipulating others. Free thinking almost unheard of. And it takes much maturing to figure it all out. Good thoughts, wonderful verbiage and good rhyme. All developed into a neat poem only you could write. A pleasure.... Dellena	2010-02-27 18:40:41
My Quill	cheyenne smyth	Cheyenne, So beautiful.....Your words flow so easily. I wish I had written this. I'm jealous! The snow, nature all intertwined,makes one delicious read. [in my book!] I'm very impressed with your work. Teach me! Dellena	2010-02-27 14:50:59
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