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Displaying Critiques 51 to 100 out of 978 Total Critiques.| Poem Title | Poet Name | Critique Given by Dellena Rovito | Critique Date |
| Bending Physics | James C. Horak | James, All I can think of is the Guantanamo Deception: Hundreds of Innocents Jailed! I'm probably off but I try. Drat I just saw your note. The advertising covers it up almost. The Bastille was a medieval fortress-prison. [that doesn't exist anymore]? Hope all is good for you and yours. It feels like something is in the air. Hopefully not. Best wishes... Dellena | 2011-10-29 19:06:53 |
| Depression | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, You can certainly turn a phrase, so to speak! You can show real depression. screeching in silence is an interesting thought. We do that a lot it seems. Your cup needs filling ever so often. Music helps me. good job... Best wishes dellena | 2011-10-29 18:30:05 |
| The World on Fire (Revision) | Mark Steven Scheffer | Mark, The world's in trouble and nobody cares 'enough' to do anything. We have been doped and duped into believing we are powerless It's trouble coming in the air. The dark before the storm...... and we do nada......but talk and worry. thoughtful! Dellena | 2011-10-29 18:18:13 |
| If My Body Were an Orchestra | Joanne M Uppendahl | Joanne, It sounds like life is looking good for you if you can sing about it. Hallelujah! I love Leonard Cohen. Music is the sound of universal love. How could we exist without it? We are music itself. The celebration of existence. Nice hearing from you always. Enjoy your work! Dellena | 2011-10-29 18:11:22 |
| Death-is it really final? | Michael Bird | Michael, Our departed do live on in our memories. I also sometimes feel their energy in the feeling of love. I feel them in the air, in the sun, in the places they were, they become part of who you are. That's what it means about being one together. Being connected. Your writing was thoughtful. We deeply miss the ones that leave.... Good job Michael. Dellena | 2011-10-25 19:02:13 |
| Soul Dream | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, First we must know of love, [to know what your crying for] then you want someone to love lastly you strive to live love. We all ache to live love and this is possible daily for everyone. It is the ultimate! There is nothing to stop us. It isn't a time to come, it is today you can have it all! Good expressive job. Dellena | 2011-10-01 17:35:16 |
| Living on the Edge | Jordan Brendez Bandojo | Jordon, All the basic we need and no frills is to some like heaven. Minus all the earthly bull and living realistic aware of the magic in nature. Sign me up I'll be happy! Love the idea now where do you find this place? Dellena | 2011-10-01 16:43:23 |
| The Key | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, I lose the key too. But as the ebb and flow of the waters moods continually change. Adjusting and moving is what we do. Hoping things will get better. The depths equal your heights..... Good poem. Dellena | 2011-09-26 21:31:07 |
| God Innately | James Edward Schanne | James, I think your right on! Whether we know of a God or not, our actions and discovery show us. Good thinking........good words. Rhyme is unshowing and subtle. nice job. Del lena | 2011-07-07 17:40:32 |
| A Dream Of You | DeniMari Z. | Deni, Nothing is higher felt than love's embrace. Be him here or there, can be experienced. Sex is of the mind they say. Missing him......... Dellena | 2011-07-03 14:17:47 |
| Ripples of Time | Lora Silvey | Lora, Lovely images, especially.......... Baby is a rose scented petal drifting in scattered sun rays gently lifted on Springs Air de temps’ Passion Alone we always are even with another. You have a way with words. good job, Dellena | 2011-07-03 14:14:33 |
| In Aspect | James C. Horak | James, So true! Unless the action is advertized, nobody notices and uses their own head. Lest they be mistaken and a fool. After all the newsmen tell all, right! Glad you have no nose ring. Dellena | 2011-06-28 14:50:03 |
| We Hide No More | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, What are we hiding from? Just the truth about ourselves. And that does take moxie to see what and whom we really are. Nature is filled with answers. Thoughtful poem.. Dellena | 2011-06-28 14:34:20 |
| Dearest Summer | cheyenne smyth | cheyenne, My garden is slow also. Who stole the sun? My vegetables are working but the coolness cramps their style. And grocery prices climb higher. Sunshine brings such hope of renewal. you 're p oem is lovely despite not enough sun. Hoping it gets warmer........ Dellena | 2011-06-21 16:02:10 |
| American Lie | James C. Horak | JCH You are talking about radioactive fallout from nuclear plant! There was a short sweet? article about staying indoors for a few days and no more news mentioned. I called the public schools to see if school continued as usual. yes! Recess outside, noon outside, no condition to accompany the falling hazard from the high. Innocent children completely oblivious as well may be their parents. Of course the weather manipulators turned up and on the sun to bring outside the people to play. What a joke or mind game. Cancer in the future anyone.. The one thing that may help us is iodine [Lugol's water purifier] used for fish acquariums. The body is lacking iodine, it was removed from most foods. [why? when it's so vital to life?] and the death toll rings..... dellena | 2011-05-26 15:55:18 |
| Clarion | Lora Silvey | Lora, Life is walking the razors edge. Although I think the powers that be are playing games with life and death. Little glimpses of eternity make one think of life's fragility. Youre poem can also depict pure emotional upheaval from any other cause. Strange how earth and humans can be so similiar. Kudos, DELLENA | 2011-05-02 15:44:35 |
| city on the river | Mark Steven Scheffer | Mark, Normal everyday things make up life in the city on the river. Each city a gathering of similar programmed eople acting inevitably the same. Eat/drink, bury the remaining. Thoughtful as only you can be. Dellena | 2011-04-29 15:06:08 |
| Stone Cold Heart | DeniMari Z. | Deni, A bit sad at your man's decision to throw away happiness like roks skimming the waters. What's meant to be seems meant to be despite our want and need. Good job, easy flow, message delivered. Dellena | 2011-04-29 15:01:10 |
| Derelict Without an Island | James C. Horak | James, Especially the earth needs loving. We are made up of earth. I think we are all an island alone. And yet we are one. I certainly can relate to the ideas in this and have felt like this before. hardly anyone could be more alone than I and I rarely feel lonely. I value my alone time as gold. I love your vulnerability. I like your nonwasteful use of words. Dellena | 2011-04-29 14:55:30 |
| To Mom Tuesday April 26th | James Edward Schanne | James, This is lovely for Mothers day. You show your appreciation and love throughout. The rhyme is good and it flows well and has nice balance. I would love it if my son wrote it for me. Wonderful job. Dellena | 2011-04-26 18:04:07 |
| I'm Here, I'm Here | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, You're there....wish I were too. You've painted a lovely forest scene with your paintbrush of words. You make the trees come alive/ I like " silence gathered from the cloak of night folds dusk into dawn" Very unique and a bit romantic. I like how you write. Dellena | 2011-04-26 14:26:02 |
| Sunday Funnies | David Keesey | David, Good Sunday morning reading the papers. I just wonder of the prize? Page one's gossip and lies... I've about given up on believing one thing they say. You write a nice poem with everything pertaining into it. Thought filled lines. I'LL BUY IT! Dellena | 2011-04-26 14:14:16 |
| Shattered Soul Snows | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, As low as we go, is as high as we rise. So that can explain depth. Safety be damned, there is none. You are doing well. Kudos Dellena | 2011-04-03 14:42:33 |
| Firefly | Mary J Coffman | Mary, One to ponder over and over. Thoughts coming-going like fireflies. Very cool. Moments in a forest of thoughts. Too many to remember. Lovely way with words. Ponderous. Dellena | 2011-03-24 15:47:43 |
| Pretty Things | James C. Horak | JCH, I like your way of writing. Using internal rhyming or ends. Is this considered free verse or what? I'm with you for liking the style. Hope your doing well and busy as usual. always......d | 2011-03-06 16:29:54 |
| FINALLY | Mandie J Overocker | Sounds like something is opening up. Maybe a different perspective. Cleverly written. Dellena | 2011-03-06 16:25:58 |
| Sun or Shade | cheyenne smyth | Wonderful! Beats me why it isn't up there? You are soooooooooo delightful to read. dellena | 2011-03-06 16:22:32 |
| Casual Witness | Lora Silvey | Lora, I like everything but the rosary and it's implications. [catholic/I was raised catholic] The establishment of church as a business comes into that. I find the total value of man and sea and his introspection of most value. An emotion of godliness and respect for nature is good. Being native american, it always surprises me when church enters the picture. Your writing is enjoyable at that. Dellena | 2011-02-21 18:28:56 |
| Underneath the Mask | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, I'd be interested why your in misery? There could be a poem there. Her mask is showing she's ok and happy. How sad. Why wear the mask. Wallow through it ... Dellena | 2011-02-20 15:42:11 |
| May Rest Come | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, I think resting is depressing myself. Sometimes a brisk walk or some hard work or play can save the day. The world is in a very distressed state and the weather manipulations and mind altering drugs in everything don't help. So we are all struggling to survive sanely. So ok its rough but that's when you reach deep and keep it going. Your writing helps to get the anger out. keep on. Dellena | 2011-02-20 15:36:17 |
| Life Tree A Challenge To Be | DeniMari Z. | Deni, So much the better when roots are strong. A lot of us come from weakness and overcome it all. By pure will. The tree is a challenge indeed. I also believe we live till we allow ourselves to surrender to death. Within our capabilities of course. I like this thoughtful poem. good job Deni.. Dellena | 2011-02-13 14:00:06 |
| I Lied | Medard Louis Lefevre Jr. | Medard, What a nice letter to us. And yes, Arnie was a big part of us and his spirit lives on in our hearts. As does Mell Morris. And remember you are TPL family as well. Thanks for inspiring us to keep on. Dellena | 2011-02-05 14:47:13 |
| Keeper of Mem’ries | Lora Silvey | Lora, Another sad poem of a loved one gone. Too bad it got in so late in the month. They say it doesn't matter but I think it does. Your meter is great, this flows well. Good job my dear. Dellena | 2011-02-05 14:28:39 |
| Old Bones | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, I think my bones have turned old too... Nice, reflective, memorable. Rhyme was not too much, flow was easy and continual, subject good, I've no complaints! Good job. Dellena | 2011-02-03 15:12:43 |
| Here - After | Mary J Coffman | Mary, I think you had another posting this month and it's gone..... drat I looooovvvved it. You write romantically flavored and it is delightful. Love you work. Very fresh! Thoughts new. Good poetry from my book of responses. Dellena | 2011-02-02 17:29:49 |
| Bathing Anew | DeniMari Z. | Deni, I can just see you, ready to step into the tub, catching a glance of yourself in the mirror.... Not the youth you once were, but holding no remorse with memories. Lucky to be bathing. I'd add an an here: Vanity may have been [an]ideal at some time good visual poem. DellenA | 2011-01-28 18:04:21 |
| Ethereal Watermark | Lora Silvey | Lora, I must be whako....I swear I reviewed this. Maybe you resubmitted it? I like the raw truth of loneliness. The ones so dear who are gone, never to see in this old world. That's why people we care about should be held so dear. nice internal rhyme, distraught thoughts. Verbiage is great I like it. A bit sad..... you'll make it through...we all do! Love, Dellena | 2011-01-28 17:57:15 |
| BONES | David Keesey | David, Sounds to me you ant a woman.......interesting subject matter. Short to the point. Good descriptive words. First read I saw spiteful instead of spriteful. Which jarred me a bit trying to understand. Instead of ending yearning to meet the same [to rhyme] maybe left open like more words like yearning......and no conclusion. Ones left to think what they will. Just a thought..... I liked it. Dellena | 2011-01-27 14:29:33 |
| The Forest | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, I could of written this of my appreciation for nature and how it fills me up. Same as this wonderful piece. Like a painting I see in my mind's eye. So lovely so grand a holy place it is. thank you..... Dellena | 2011-01-15 17:58:55 |
| Oh Shakespeare | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, Everything flowed great until the last two lines.... Maybe Oh Shakespeare, Shakespeare let my pen's ink flow .............................desires the lover’s glow Whatever..... Loved your rhyme and rhythm. A lovely piece Dellena | 2010-12-30 15:03:33 |
| No Visible Scars | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, Ain't that the truth! It could be horrors and it doesn't show. That's good, that's bad. Your alliteration of frozen open snow is good. rhyme real concealed good. It flows wonderfully. Good subject. Nice ending of melting snow.......makes one wonder. Good...... Dellena | 2010-12-30 14:52:31 |
| Perfect Light | Lora Silvey | Lora, Nice, if only I believed it! I wished it were all so simply sweet. Happy holidays dear friend Dellena | 2010-12-23 19:58:16 |
| Broken Pallet | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, Always so intense, colorful, sad and thoughtful. People never learn to be kind. Of course in these days of trial life is difficult. You write from your heart so well. Dellena | 2010-12-23 19:55:53 |
| Folded Time | Lora Silvey | Lora, I read this days ago and thought I'd reviewed it. It's lovely I tell you....... There is a certain reality you write intimately about your past that other writings can't hold a candle to the realism. Just as we each have experienced and identify too. great job! Dellena | 2010-12-04 16:15:35 |
| Gravestones | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, How sad to miss the ones that are gone from our world. I'd love to keep gathered the people I've loved forever, life would be so full. And yet in memories they reside parts of us always. Your love, sadness and loss resonate through this piece. Good job. Dellena | 2010-12-04 16:09:15 |
| It must be time to write a poem | Mark Andrew Hislop | Mark, Really good. Feeling free to just do....it! Write whatever comes. And wise and witty it is. Who knew....all of us! But maybe not you! Dellena | 2010-12-04 16:01:48 |
| Time | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, I like this...sweet. I like the rhyme......the dark of winter and lovely sun of spring. Very peaceful yet thought-full. Dellena | 2010-12-04 15:58:48 |
| Pachyderms & Jackasses | Mark D. Kilburn | Mark, And the plan has been in operation for a long many years. Nobody had the time or ability. The computer has made us aware as never before. Still the majority don't know or believe. Your story is great! True and difficult to live. That's where all the depression is coming from. We need to unite and fight city hall and continue forward to congress and the leaders. dellena | 2010-11-20 18:30:53 |
| I Wonder | Mandie J Overocker | Mandie, I think rising despite the shroud, we fly. It will be difficult, but I think it can be done. It starts with one, then another....... dellena | 2010-11-20 18:11:52 |
| Shattered Orange | cheyenne smyth | Cheyenne, This was melancholy. The family long since gone, memories of better easier children's days. And today the gray clouds stay as the powers that be have decided to change up things and depopulate. It is not the best of times..........for anyone. You carry the theme well throughout. Good job Dellena | 2010-11-20 18:07:47 |
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